intense, disturbing and wonderful.

OMG, crying here. Love the ending, "And they will walk on molten lava, and lie in the savannah to wait for wild fires, and take turns passing their fingers through candles because that's who they are." Love that bit, actually, i just loved it all. Brilliant.

Beautiful. That is all I have to say.

Wow this is really good

Whhaaahahyyyyyyyy D',','X Oh God I'm sobbing. I'm dead. You've killed me. I'm done, that's it I'm done.

There really was no other way to end this sad tale. That doesn't stop me from feeling depressed. But at the same time it was a very satisfying end. I don't think I would have had it any other way. Thank you for sharing your wonderful work on this site!

This was a really good story. I thoroughly enjoyed it ]

Against my better judgment I read the rest! It was so sad, beautifully sad! Still needs a tragedy rating!

Cheers again, AJ James

Natasha spiraling could be very interesting (and sad) to watch. Without Clint, she has no one she can trust and openly talk to. No one to support her and completely understand her. They orbited around each other, and now he's gone, and she's spiraling.

Now I know I have a heart. Because it is breaking. T_T sgsbsbsnsbshwhwgbsdb/)/&&/ / :!6278/$/):%%}£*#***£ WhyyYyyyyyyy whaaattttttttttt cruel cruel author. Broken, shatter, obliterated, hearts aside, wonderful idea (it makes me passionate, can you tell?) flawless writing. I am a huge fan of Panic! And I nearly had an anyerism when Nat started singing it. Always is one of my favorite songs. :) thanks for sharing this with us!

I thought that her singing in the shower was going to help everything along. Help bring him back to himself. I thought her stepping out seeing him like that, that he would just put it down and everything would be fine because they were together. I dont know if I'll continue to read this story if the rest is going to be this sad. Just FYI. but I am reading the next chapter right now.

Oh, God. How angsty. I can't believe Clint killed himself. What the heck. WHYYYYYYY? But very well written. Kudos to you. Here, have a weird symbol.

I'm just scrolling through am I'm like, oh, another chapter of that beautifully written and horribly heartbreaking fic, I should go read it. Maybe this chapter could be sweeter. No. Nope, not at all, an now I am crying again. I'm a hard person to reduce to tears so congrats, you have done it twice in a row.

Wonderful, truly wonderful. I really liked it. Extremely well written, again, and geartbreakigly beautiful. Natasha seemed very in character. Great job, I hope you will continue. I can't wait for the next chapters.

Hoping I get to review again for you soon,

DCdreamer

Oh, and I love that song.

oh wow. that was well written.

tragic as all get out but well written.

i think black widow's response was the most appropriate. because you don't come back from that.

good job.

congratulations

luring me into a false sense of security like that. your made me ruin my nail polish. i hope your happy.

however all grievances aside THAT WAS AMAZING

just going to go read every other thing you have every written now kbye