Well, I'm new to the To Love-Ru fandom, being only on Motto, but I like it. Being new, I've actually just been introduced to Nana recently, but I can already tell she's my favorite character. Don't know much about her yet, but I think you did a wonderful job with her character and the story. Have you thought about an independent Nana X Rito fanfic?

Oh, damn, what a good fic this was! How can you say that you can't strongly write Nana, when you nailed her character to the tee? Very good fic, I'd like it to continue in an episodic series, but as this has been here for over three years, I doubt it. Anyways, very good job, Nana needs more stories!

Ah, it's nice to finally see you making an update, and breaking the 10k words I might add.

The story itself was great, that, combined with your style of writing just makes it a whole lot better. And the way you wrote always bring some serenity and calmness to me, given that I'm an angst fan myself.

The characters fit their personality perfectly, and you even managed to pull Nana off. Although Momo isn't as sadistic as usual but it's not that important so it didn't make any difference given the main focus is Nana.

I hope you'll update more often. I love reading your stories, although I would love it more if you wrote ones with Yui in it XP

About your past stories. Is there any chance you'll repost them here again? I would like to read 'The Fool and The Cat' and 'The memories of a Snow' once again :)

I can't... what even- there isn't.

MY

I was told by another author here to check out your work (they consider you a god amongst men) and honestly man, I'm blown away. The whole style of this, the thought tracks, the speech... It's all so professional. You've definitely done this before, haven't you?

I was also told that you did other works before your current two, but you took them down. I'm sure you had your reasons, but it's still a shame. I would've liked to have read them.

10/10 Bro, I really wanna see more :)

Awesome!
you sould really consider cotinuing this in a chapter thing :p

Yay! You're back! It's about time :)

Wah, what a good story! It's a really good oneshot for Nana. I like her lines when they're standing in the rain. They felt real. TLR's been on the site for a few years now and this is really only the second serious Nana fic available. Definitely worth a read. I'm surprised no one else has reviewed yet!

Style: ****

Story: ***

Originality: ****

(All ratings out of 5 stars.)

Notes: A few oversights and mechanical errors, but nothing major. Your style is still really good, your story was good for a oneshot, and as there aren't many stories for Nana out there, it has a nice sense of originality.

I liked your portrayal of Nana. It was nice. Now... HURRY UP AND WRITE MORE FICS! XD