A cute little piece! I think you did a great job with the characterisation as well as your improvised scene (alrhough I'm not quite sure if Ib's rose would have lost all its petals by the time she emerged from the lake again - it did hurt her quite a lot). Keep up the good work! :)

it's Absolutely Great and what we need!
I'm Loving it!

Very good story it was really nice to read it. :)

I really like this ending. I actually seen a video of this of this, but Mary helps. Really good!

MORE PLEASE!

This was a cool alternate ending, but it wouldn't have fit in the game as an option, but I liked the idea. I would like to say they don't die even though the game heavily implies it in many places, but instead that they are sleeping and are in something like a deep coma.

It seems unfinished to me. I was expecting more (;_; )

The Forgotten Portrait ending... It's one of the saddest endings I've ever seen. :'( Would've been great had there been an ending where they all found happiness but... In any case, this was a very nice one-shot so I applaud thee. :)

Sigh, if only this would happen.

i loved it. it was amazing

THis IS awESomE! GooD Job!

:3 pritty
But i want to share my opinion of how i see the endings XD
The best one: Promise of reunion :3
The meh(normal/kinda blah)ending:Uncranny memories
The bad ending: Forgotten portrait/ib all alone
THE SHIT ASS ENDING THAT YOU HATE!:Togerther Forever(Mary makes my blood boil :E)

Aww, if only this had really happened ;u;

nice

That was easy.