Wow. I'm impressed. Really!

I mean, there was so much packed into this one reflective piece and I just love how it all ties back to how he lent her his scarf and how much that act really meant. I also love the inner turmoil of Mako realizing how Korra instinctively knew what it meant to him and the implication of how that confuses what he thinks he wants.

So much goodness here. You neatly illustrated his life via that red scarf and it just works.

It's oddly captivating. Thank you

Aww, I like it! I never thought of the scarf as having a history like that before. Mako and Korra really do fit together well... he just needs to let his other woman down gently! :)

OMG! This was so good! So emotional! I really feel for Mako! You need to right more!

What a sweat little story! I literally went 'awwwwwwwwww!' at the end.

This is really good! Am I right in thinking that you're referring to Episode 3, when Korra wore a scarf that was presumably Mako's? It did kind of save her when she was fighting.

The only thing you need to watch out for is past tense, especially using the word "had". For a second I thought you were saying Bolin had actually lost his bending.

I like how you portrayed Mako's thoughts about Asami, it was sensible and kind toward her. Great job on this.