Welcome back :)

Yikes, even in writing this series is still scary...

I really like this story and I'm glad to see that it wasn't abandoned (like brown eyes). Theres not a lot of people in our little fandom and I'm glad we have a few good writers like you. Keep up the good work!

Your back! :D

Thank you so much for updating :)

...she's scary though I can understand why. Still, she's being rather harsh towards Brown Eyes T_T;;

Can't wait to see the next chapter if I'm right Yarai and his group are not far away

Well, the chapter was, for the most part, a retelling of the first few chapters of the manga. There were moments where Sakka did stuff, but I can't really give you too much advice until things start to develop. I'm not sure when you'll be creating a plot-diversion (if one at all), but until your OC gets some more action, I'm not sure what to say.

What I DID see, though, is the side of her that's a bit twisted. We already knew it was there, but to see her break open the bird's skull for its brains and eyes rather than getting a cut of meat was a bit creepy. She's also trying to hang on to the little things, like the beach, despite the absolute terror she's in.

I'm staying tuned for your next chapter, and hopefully some things will develop further.

Will Sakka (is that her name? I can't remember) meet Akira and the others? From where you described her location, she was probably near his group. She's loosing her mind a bit faster than I expected but ok.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter _

Sweeeeeet. I love Cage of Eden, so seeing a good fic about it is awesome. Your use of line breaks and bold text work to set a really good first person feel, but things tend to get cluttered and hard to read. Sakka's flashback was sad and brutal, but things were hard to keep track of. I had trouble denoting what was a flashback, what was a dream, and what was real. I got it in the end, but try to keep longer paragraphs so things are easier to follow.

I'm glad you've kept to the actually storyline, characters included. Being able to have an OC interact with this widely varied cast opens many opportunities.

My one question is this: When you take Sakka's past into account, how will she handle the Cage of Eden? We know from the main story that this was a collaborative effort to "create" a Garden of Eden, so with all of these things happening around her, how will she act? Will she embrace the darkness she's been shown capable of? Or will she stay passive, waiting for death like she'd always been. You've created a character that will kill for something she deems worth protecting, and that could clash with Sengoku's ideology if Sakka joins the group. She seems like a woman who was somewhat broken before the plane even landed, so what could Raika Island do to her psyche at this point?

I'm very much liking things so far, and hope to see more from you soon!

One word:WOW

Was she dreaming or was that real? Looking forward to more :)

This was a good chapter. I hope more come out soon. I want to find out more of what's going to happen to your main character.

WOW I just love how you write the manga with your own words, you are an amazing writter!

She has really shitty luck. Hopefully someone with a decent mind set will find her.

Please update soon :)

Amazing story so far. Your word choice and imagery are perfect and the descriptions make it seem like I'm actually there!

Your written of the after-plane crash event was really touching I could actually feel myself as beign in the plane