I like your take on game canon story. Sad, but good writing.

Huh. I really liked everything about this chapter. I think this is my favorite of your short RokuShi ficlets. I liked your explain action at the bottom as well. I don't have a favorite (though I perticularly enjoyed Aqua dating Axel) as the whole thing was really enjoyable, beginning to end. Absolutely my favorite ficlet of these two outside of your CatC AU. Really good:

An amusing little chapter

Short, cute, amusing.

Ugh my feels... Reminds me of 358/2 days *cries*

Roxas and Xion are so cute; they remind me of puppies. XD

I want to see Axel in a suit. X3 Of course he’d feel guilty about going on a date when their dates are out of town even though it’s not his fault. *affectionate eye roll*

"He said he tries to treat me as if every day is Valentine's Day. And he pretty much does, you know? I'd rather get little special moments every day than something huge special just once a year." D’aww, that’s really sweet.

Lol, I like the almost-romantic-platonicness going on here, I don’t know how to explain it. xP

“When he opened her bedroom door, he was surprised to see her rummaging through her closet, wearing a nice skirt and nothing on top but a bra. / Xion gave a little shriek and hurled a shoe at him. It was one of her high heels.” Lol, I can just see Roxas being a dork brother and getting stabbed with a shoe. XD XD XD And of course he doesn’t realize that he should try to be somewhat fancy too. I love how even though he and Xion are both clueless in canon, Roxas always seems to be a ton more clueless in AUs. I think it’s because he’s a guy. xP

“It suddenly occurred to Roxas that if this was Kairi, he would have complimented her. "Xion, you look really pretty."” Roxas’s simple thought process amuses me. :3

Of course all the fancy restaurants are full, Rox. xP I love their back-up choice. XD

"You think Aqua's ever seen Axel without his hair all gelled up?" XD XD XD Yay, I like how Aqua’s Axel’s girlfriend in this universe (at least I’m assuming); I like the idea of that pairing but I’ve yet to see it actually written. That I remember, anyway.

“Roxas ordered a slice of chocolate pie and carved it into a heart shape, sliding the result toward Xion and saving the excised bits for himself. "Because girls should get chocolate on Valentine's Day."” Have I mentioned how adorable Roxas is? X3

Aww… the exchange with the old lady was sad… but Roxas and Xion were so sweet to be nice to her. :’3

“"That was dumb," Roxas said hotly after they had talked for a little while and gone on their way again. "She was nice. Why would any jerk leave her like that?"” Again, Roxas’s simple though process is the best. I wish everyone worked like that.

D’aww, and the RokuShi at the end was sweet. I’ve come to like them lots better as siblings, too. C:

This one is so sad. ;; Your descriptions of Roxas's deteriorating health are very well-writen, though. I need to write more RokuShi friendship, especially with RokuShi Day coming up. Or did I already miss it? *Checks list* Dang it, that's today, isn't it. *headdesk* Hmm, I might still whip something out in the next few hours if I can. I hate being on hiatus; I need to whip my muse back into shape. *sweatdrop*

I actually surprised you didn't try to shoehorn a Twilight reference in here, it certainly would have been apparpo. Otherwise, it was a bit too short to flesh anything out.

Cute, I also think the Saix and Axel randomness was funny, and I like how you added some of Axels signature fire crap

INCEST IS WINCEST

Cute At first, I never payed attention much to the couple Rokushi also... and now look at me. Trying to read every great fanfic of them such as this one on this site!

D'aw, it was cute! I don't think there's actually any freaking way siblings in real life would do this, but with these two it kinda works.

Anyways, Happy Singles Awareness Day! Post more Fire & Moonlight chapters, those are hilarious!

Aww...so cute! I love the way you make it have the light hint of platonic romance- it's perfect for Valentine's day, and I like the humor in it as well. Great job! Thanks for posting,

Bookworm

That was just cute. Roxas the bear...! And the AkuSai parts were hilarious!

LOLLLL I didn't even know this was an AU at first xD *fail* But thsi was so cute :3 Roxas's thoughts were very amusing, and they were cute. And Axel's reaction was hilarious xD

"H-How? WHEN?" xD Whenever you look away, Axel.

Very cute :3