Amazing! Loved it!
There were some grammar errors along the way and possibly some tiny mishap at the part where they came home but as always I read through it with my own logic filling in.
Otherwise I got a good kick out of this for few days

I noticed you spelled SHIELD wrong a bit. It's S.H.I.E.L.D. not "SHEILD" just so you wish to return and fix it.
I'm not meaning it as if it's poking my eye out but it does just a little bit. Yes, most people also struggle with Romanoff by having "Romanov" instead. It is a bit poking at my eye but I don't complain.
We aren't perfect. Especially those of grammar not close to their native sides.

Ok I'm done blabbering off to next chapters while my attention hasn't gone over Tony too much. We have it in common I noticed. The attention problem. Where Iron Man was ten years ago when I was still in school? I'd been more diagnosed after one IM movie than I ever was by my jiggly neurologist. Which I am now more after more than one movie and bunch of psycho babble my brain loves to gloat on

Sorry sorry. I'm actually out.

XD

ok so then bruce, & natasha are tony's older brother, & sister. thor is that one cousin who enjoy family too much, clint is like a best friend, & steve is a close call to bromance. pepper's the girlfriend, happy's that one friend that a close brother model, rhodey is another older brother for tony, & fury is that on boss no one likes, but have they're different reasons to like him for. Did i get everyone?

OK first of all, I freakin love this. You created an amazing story and got all of the characters personalities perfect. I really enjoyed this fic. It was nice to read something that wasn't just gay fanfiction or ships. In fact I'm happy there wasn't ant ships at all. It made it seem more like the avengers. So thanks you, this really made my last couple of days. (By The way I loved the parts where Thor saw things on "the spirit box" or said "man of iron". It just really lightened the mood and made it that much more fun.) And thanks again for creating this, you've for a career as a writer ahead of you

Loved it. Just...loved it. ;)

Nooooooooo!

This was very interesting. I was spellbound by the cane. Good suspense n great details.

ok, it started out dramatic and sad-ish and hurt/comforting. but I LOVED the cute ending. :) thank you for this... still confused on how the guy got a hold of the conversation between yinsen and tony. but I still loved this.

"Still a man with everything, and nothing Stark." O0O... HOW THE FUCK HELL DID SOMEONE HEAR ABOUT THAT?! because I REFUSE to believe that yinsen is evil I JUST WON'T! *not angry at author... just shaken up.. like tony... hugs shaken tony* *shivers* PLEASE tell me there's a reason for that.. and not the whole "yinsen is evil" shit. :'( 'cause I respect yinsen HIGHLY for what he did for tony. *puppy eyes* PLEASE don't turn yinsen evil. it would BREAK tony. ... *breathing* ok. I'm calmer now. ... there IS a good reason for that message right? 'cause TONY wasn't the only one shaken up. ;-; ... wow, that message REALLY has him shaken doesn't it? then again from the conversation going on between him and rhodey I'm not surprised. :'( "It's not just a threat against me, it's against you, Pepper, Happy, Bruce and everyone else." ... ohhhhhhhhhhh. so THAT'S what's got him freaked... that and the fact that this guy knows about what yinsen said... *sheepish* oh and ignore the whole "don't let yinsen be evil" I was too shaken to think straight.. sorry... so.. all in all an interesting chapter. :)

... O.O... what was the message?

SHIT this is getting good. *hurriedly clicks the next page* good job. :D

I agree with you wholeheartedly, all the men and women who serve should be respected.

Oh man. This was well worth the read.

I think you might want to check your geography...

Thanks for the shoutout to Seattle/personal feelings!
10/10 keep working on writing!