what happened? why did u stop?
I cannot picture a happy ending here...

Jesus. Mickey did what? this just got dark real fast

And they're off, fantastic. I'm sooooooo looking forward to this ride.
I've got to say, I've never really liked Lloyd, so I'm keeping my fingers crossed that he came good in the end. He did, didn't he?
Let me know Jimmy, let me know.

This is really good so far.

Attaboy Ian, you drive a hard bargain. Well done you.

This story is really gripping now.
I wondered what would happen when the construction site was utilised again, now I know. That was a very good plot device Jimmy, propelling the story forward like that.
The stakes have now been raised.
The boys are outta here.
The boys are out.
Can't wait for more x.

Mickey boy, you've got the (apparent) luck of the Irish.
For now.

:D

Ooh can't wait to see what happens. Thanks for sharing.

:D

i hope i dont have to wait as long for the next chapter as i did for this one; but even so it was worth the wait i'd say

CONTINUE Just saying :D

continue!

Continue but please don't let him get locked up.

you need to keep going. but on the off hand that your dont then this does make a pretty good one shot

This is good.

I'd like for you to continue, but it also stands very strongly as a single piece.