I couldn't stop laughing! This was GREAT! One of the best slash fan fics i have ever read! you got the SG1 team perfectly! Loved how you wrote Daniel and Jack. Methos was wonderful too with his explanations and how he dealt with the natives! Great Job!

Bonnie

aw... so cute! of course, ive never even seen highlander, so i had no idea what was going on at times, but i got the general gist of things. and the gist was adorable! XD! a very very awesome fic!

Norv! how sweet!

"Let's go to the bedroom and make out like teenagers!"

That made me laugh. I love this fic, it had a nice flow to it. Thanks for writing it!

::grins:: I love it terrific job!

Great

Aw! So cute! Good story.I enjoyed the way you wrote it and I absolutely LOVED the way you got Jack and DAniel together.

Okay, this was a little confusing in parts. One, as far as I know from reading this, they did not get trapped in the little room. The force field did not close behind them. They were only not able to step forward. Two, why did the natives attack them exactly? I mean, surly they must know about the riddle on the door as well. And third, what exactly is Peter? Why was he able to stab himself and heal? Why did he fake his death exactly? There needs to be some clarifying in this but I really loved it. It was wonderful and I would read it again. I feel bad about Peter though. I liked him. He was a very cool character but I am pleased that Daniel and Jack got together at the end. Are you going to write a sequel about this so we can find out how their relationship goes? Because I think that it is too soon for Jack to know that he loves Daniel. Anyway, thanks a lot for writing this and please continue to write more stories in the future.

am a little way into the last part and it is very long so I decided to come back and leave a review for this chapter and one for the other one later.
i like the idea. it's nice and original and i like Peter. I think that he is pretty cool. and he knows a lot so i can see why they needed him to help Daniel. i'm really wondering where this is going to go and what is going to happen and so i can't wait to finish reading it. but then it'll be gone and i'll have to look for another story. and good fiction is hard to find.
anyway, this is very good so far and i look forward to reading more of the next part.

hmm... *thinks about that* Seems fishy to me too, Jack. But I'm sure Daniel is safe for a while anyway. But why do they need another expert on Ancient languages on the team? Isn't that Daniel's department? And I think he is doing a fine job on his own.

No actual plot, well, other than the romance. Which was nicely done. They didn't meet and everything was sex happily ever after.
You actually had them have problems, realize what was happening, and they will obviously take their time with a future relationship. Though it was a bit fast... I'm one of those who never get a story done because I pull it out to long, ::sigh::, I then feel compelled to write what happened for the time that passed and before you know it I have a twenty-three chapter story on my hands that hasn't introduced the real problem. So this was good, don't change it.
This was a good crossover, you should write more of them. There isn't enough good Stargate: SG-1 crossovers where SG-1 is actually useful, seems putting them in a cossover erasing the fact they fought godlike creatures and won, and makes them babies that can't defeat a plastic straw (stupid Buffy crossovers... GRR).
Anyway, I like your story. Write another good one!

Really good job!

Just found this fic, really cool. :)

*shivers*

He showed his true colors..and it was very very nice. Too bad he couldn't stick around though. He's so very cool, and could be so useful on missions.

At least Jack and Danny finally got their acts together and paired up.

wow. i didn't know what to expect when i started reading, but i do know that it is way more amazing then i thought it would be. please write a sequel. i loved how you worked peter in, and if you do a sequel i hope he's in it also.

I do hope you plan on continuing this it promises to be real good. Would love to see what happens in the relationships between the three men.