Super cute

This was a lot of fun to read, and very cute!

Awww! That was so cute! Beautiful story, I think you're going to make me fall in love with this ship. ;)

Thanks for writing, great work!

-Charmy

Only one thing to say to something like that - WOW.

First remark: though it's perfectly acceptable in a freeverse, I find that in prose it is rather annoying to have these semi-random words in italics or bolds. It's just a bit too much, I'd say.

The comparison in the beginning between Draco/Scorpius and Rose/Hermione was well done, it showed just how difficult it can be to live up to expectations/role-models/legacy's, be they good or bad.

I think you did a good job on Scorpius' conflicting emotions and the kiss was sweet. :)

Very good. :)

Totally adorable! You have a really beautiful, poetic way with words - descriptive in any story really makes the effort of reading it worthwhile for me. Theres nothing better than reading a story where the writer has such a wonderful and exquisite way with description. Excellent work - I really can't critique this at all!