This story's amazing! If you have free time, maybe you could work on more Danny Phantom stuff? I love your writing and look forward to seeing you

sounds like fun except for the hitting the ground part

I liked it. It was very good.

That was great it shows potential

lol nice! I like seeing them all acting like the kids they are and having some fun :)

Short, sweet. A really nice look at a softer side of Maddie. A pleasure to read with no annoying grammar mistakes that I could see. I'll just tuck this into my favorites.

Yeah you did great! I really liked it! Try to make some more, you're good. :)

Hey... u r good at writing DP fanfictions, even if the idea came from another author. Write more DP!

Maddie trusted him way too easily. Prejudices run deep. Beyond that, nice one-shot.

I love it

i love it

AWESOME!XD

You did it wonderfully.

and i the person you were talking about. i'm still here but FF went loco on me for some reason. so i moved all mt plot bunny's to DA.

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great story even if it's someone else's idea. good length for a chapter, little to no spelling errors, and characters act as they would in the show! If you plan on making another chapter obvisiously i can't wait to read it. :D

I think it was good