Reviews for PunchOut! Second Round
MosaicArts chapter 18 . 8/1/2019
Oh ho ho ho man. This and Fist of the Black star are HANDS DOWN my new favorite chapters, there were so many unexpected twists and turns and so many epic moments that I'll refrain from saying for multiple reasons, and honestly, Imo, it's gotta be the best chapter of this fic so far. Overall, I can't think of anything I didn't like about it, great job!
MosaicArts chapter 13 . 7/25/2019
Just read this chapter, gotta be my favorite one so far, the main reason is the uniqueness it has compared to what's I've read so far and it's premise is interesting, also, nice Ghostbusters reference.
MosaicArts chapter 6 . 7/18/2019
Hey, I wanted to tell you, I'm really liking this story so far and can't wait to see what else comes from it, I'm a fan of Punch Out, and so far this is shaping up to be an interesting continuation! Nice work!
IronJoe chapter 20 . 6/29/2019
Hey dude, I don’t know if you’ll read this, but I read this story many years ago shortly after first playing the Wii game, and I really enjoyed it! I don’t know why I didn’t make an account back then and say so, but I was reminded of it while watching a blindfolded speedrun of the game today and just wanted to let you know how much I loved this whole thing. The way you incorporated the mechanics of Punch-Out with the new characters was super cool.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/12/2019
Oh dude! Dude! You know how Donkey Kong was the secret fighter for Mac in Punch Out for the Wii? You should put Knuckles from Sonic the Hedgehog as a secret fighter! Yeah I know he's not Nintendo but Knuckles I think would be fitting in this regard.

I can picture him, not only hitting hard, but also being like the fastest fighter.
Citanaf18 chapter 11 . 3/4/2019
Sorry, but I noticed some errors in your Latin on Chapter 11. Here is what I found and what could be better:
Sunt te vix: Sunt is "They/there are," so you could say "In timore es?" (Are you in fear?)
Percutite: PercutiTE is plural. Use "Pulsa!"
Ecce... ingenii should be "Ecce... Meae Ingenii!"
Ego expectantes: Ego is I, but "Sum" is I am. Expectantes is plural. I recommend "Expectans Sum."
Sunt arma lassus: Arma talks about weapons, not human limbs. Use "Manus lassum estis?"
Venit in, ledo me: In doesn't work like that. It's an imperative, so try "Veni, et pulsa me" which means "Come, and strike me."
Mea verum potentia: You have no word for Know. Maybe use "Sci mea potentiam verum!"
Hoc est impossibile: Hoc is the wrong case. Try "Hic impossibilem est!"
Oculos videre omnes: "Mei oculi omnem vident..."
Usus nugas ut te: "Sunt non bonum ex quisquilia tamquam te." (There is no good from garbage like you.)
Bonum est tibi pinguis vir: pinguis means painting or painter, last I checked. Say "Hic est tuo sanitati, obesitatis specimen!" (This is for health, paragon of obesity!)
Operor...: Better would be "Noli permitte suus cavilli decipere te! Specta cautela!" (Don't allow his taunts to decieve you! Watch with caution!)
JustAnotherGirl chapter 20 . 2/9/2019
Hey. Look, I'm not sure if you'll ever see this(it is a pretty old story after all) but I just want to tell you, I've been searching for this story for a WHILE now on the internet.
Confused?
Let me explain lol.
So last year, my older brother was killed in a car accident. It was... Awful. But he and I used to bond over video games, have tournaments and whatnot. And PunchOut! Was one of the games we loved. I remember a couple of years back he told me about this story, and how cleverly written he thought it was. We talked about it, discussed the story and such, and that was it.
Recently since the anniversary of his accident, I decided to play PunchOut! again, and I thought of this story that we talked about years ago. And so I started searching. I finally found it, and I'm so happy to be reading through it again.
It's unlikely that you'll ever finish this story... And that makes me sad.
Either way, I just want you to know, that your story really made my dorky brother happy. Reading it makes me feel like maybe he's not gone after all
vortexdie4 chapter 20 . 1/11/2019
When is the next chapter?
Guest chapter 20 . 7/23/2018
I'm looking forward to Mac's next fight with Megan. If this story continues. But if it doesn't I just want to say I loved the story. I'm not normally one a fan of shipping but this time I liked it. Thanks for making what will likely be the best Punch Out story I've read.
Guest chapter 18 . 7/23/2018
ALL RIGHT MAC! VICTORY!
Guest chapter 17 . 7/23/2018
Well that was a massive twist. And talk about a cliff hanger.
Guest chapter 7 . 7/23/2018
I'm gonna like the Megan cheering bits.
Guest chapter 5 . 7/23/2018
Oh yes! Thank you for adding a girl fighter!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/23/2018
Having just finished watching Punch Out for the Wii I'm VERY interested in how this fic will play out.
Percy chapter 3 . 3/3/2018
REAALLYY shouldnt have used google translate for the italian dialogue... some of the things pisa says are grammatically wrong, cool chapter anyways
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