That was genuinely so funny, endearing and sweet!

"Awkward and bumbling one minute, suave and secure in the next." Garrus in a nutshell. This was lovely - tender and funny.

Le sigh...

Oh gawd how I laughed. Thank you for this story. It was the perfect mix of adorable, awkward and funny. I felt so self-councious for poor Garrus and so frustrated for Shepard. Which was the intention. I was in a fit of giggles right about the same time Sheppard was.

I have to say your writing is excellent. I've been following the favorite authors of the author of the first Mass Effect story I read and liked and I've found nothing but well-written stories with perfect grammar and characterization.

Helen

This was soooooooooooooo hilarious and cute. Just fits in their characters. Nice work!

*GIGGLES* okay so I'm going to be perfectly blunt here, me and my bf were totally like this til I moved in not long ago. LOL we were both so FRUSTRATED XD

I just. That was. Just so. Perfect. a;bihraoti8ua39hlgjdfuhvn

This was hilarious and adorable! Very in character too. :D

That was wonderful! I was giggling and Aww-ing at the same time

I'm happy that I was directed here by my friend, it was a really nice read and a great in-character presentation of both Garrus and Shepard :D Well done! I couldn't help but chuckle when he mentioned the non-verbal human communication, that's just something Garrus would do :3

This was so fun and sweet at the same time :D

Aww, that was so sweet and funny! I'm sitting here with a huge grin on my face. Thank you! :)

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Oh I laughed so goddamn HARD at this- in a public library. Talk about an inter-species awkwardness thing. Absolutely loved the dialogue, none of it felt out of character. I can so imagine this happening in the Mass Effect universe haha. Thanks for the great read. I haven't looked in on your other stories yet, but you definitely should do more work on these two.

Such a sweet story! Truly felt real to me!