| Reviews for No Stopping Fate: Reading Divided Soul |
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Guest chapter 41 . 5/4 Great book but what was the 'hidden skill' of the sea god again? |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/16/2019 One year prior to the Lightning Thief? I think you messed up the date. |
Jamal rarick chapter 4 . 12/16/2019 You really need to change that. It’s not praetor of a cohort, it’s centurion. There are only 2 praetors. It’s really getting on my nerves |
Jamal rarick chapter 2 . 12/16/2019 I don’t know if it was done on purpose, but Minerva has no children. Athena HATES Rome, to the point she wants it to burn. Reyna already has a mother anyway. And she’s not praetor of the first cohort, she’s praetor of the 12 legion. And it makes no sense to me for everyone to be glaring or hitting Leo for interrupting, when everyone else does it too |
SpiritsOfTheWorld chapter 49 . 6/20/2019 Certain parts of the story have been changed Like for example Zoe comes back to life and also Annabeth catches Prometheus instead of Percy catching him |
SpiritsOfTheWorld chapter 53 . 5/16/2019 Was this chapter changed from the original book? In the original book percy captures prometheus |
Guest chapter 16 . 10/20/2017 "Hades stared at Annabeth in awe. "You played ball with Cerberus?" he asked." Sometimes I think you forget that your characters have supposedly read the PJO books before this. I haven't reread PJO since 2015, but I think she played ball with him in Lightning Thief. |
Death Fury chapter 54 . 6/14/2017 loved the story! |
Death Fury chapter 51 . 6/14/2017 #Spider Sense |
Guest chapter 54 . 3/26/2017 So freakin awesome! Best story ever one of them anyway but back to the point this is so touching and made me cry you are awesome! |
katraj0908 chapter 1 . 8/13/2016 It would have been interesting if the people reading this were from the canon universe including Percy after the Heroes of Olympus. Like their reactions to how different everything is. |
Guest chapter 54 . 3/13/2016 This is so good! Is like a story inside a story! And i usually hate happy endings but this is just amazing! You have talent :D |
Piperemi chapter 2 . 12/6/2015 If Reyna and bobby are twins then bobby can't be athena's roman form's son one because there were no mivera children sat camp jupiter and two because reyna's mom is beolna. |
coolcat chapter 54 . 10/26/2015 This story is awesome! I'm crying while I'm writing this. ALL HALE THE HEROES OF OLYMPUS! and Sally Minerva Jackson and the gods! |
Ice chapter 54 . 10/4/2015 Woah! I am so amazed... I just was waiting till my favorite fanfiction author to update when I saw that you were one of her favorite authors. So I thought to myself why not and clicked your page. I started reading this thinking no one could top my favorite but you just did. I love your writing style. And I know you are going to be one heck of an author. Heck you could have this book published. Will definitely read more. |