Love it :D

Um, wait. That was actually Jess? But, I thought... he said... then how...? *confusing out of freaking mind*

Anyway, very lovely interpretation. Now then... *goes off to wiki*

Lovely writing and a great concept. I always wondered who that look-a-like was, and what Judai thought about the look-a-like after he found Johan possessed by Yubel. It's worth some thought.

Anyway, this was a well-written story, and I enjoy the emotion and detail you put in - really draws the reader in. The ending was perfect though, in my opinion. All in all, great work, and I look forward to more from you!

I don't know what to say other than: that was beautiful. It was sad, but still very good. I really liked it.

SKoA

It's nicely written. Juudai's in pretty serious denial, isn't he? Not just about Johan's death, but the fact that wasn't even Johan at all, just a lookalike. When he realizes the truth, that's going to hit him hard.

I do wonder who that guy really was, though. Too bad canon will never give us an answer. Oh, well. :)

As I said, nicely written, and a good concept.