Love these - I like the teasing jostling tone you strike with them, it seems very in character to me. Great writing too.

Nicely done! There is potential for more! :)

Wow this was beautiful. Pease update soon.

I love love love this! I have no idea why I didn't read it earlier since I pretty much read everything in the SWATH archive. But better later than never :)

That was fantastic! Beautifully written and a pleasure to read!

Oh, sweetness! If this doesn't make it more... aww! Take me, take me now! This melts me to the bone! Oh, super wonderfully written, excellent piece!

And haha! That "fetching in mail" remark? I will never hear it the same way ever again. You have given those four (as you've put it) straightforward, honest, and to me, sweet words a whole new meaning to my ears, mind and... oh, dare I say it, heart! :) Yes, that's what SWATH does to you, especially if it's Snowric!

Such an exceptional work! And unique, too! I mean, almost no dialog (almost, for there were a few words from Snow White, but yes, none from the ever-so-cute and dear Huntsman!), yet never lacking in feels? Truly awesome! Please do keep it up!

Beautifully written. Every phrase was eloquently put and in tone with the film. A few typos but a magnificent read nevertheless.

Wow. Great read. Thanks.

That is beautifully written, my dear. And perfectly within character.

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I really love this. It's perfectly in character and sweet and adoreable, and makes my fangirl heart sigh in happiness! Thank you for such a lovely fic!
xxx

This made my heart lurch and my stomach drop at times (aka all the feels),you are a wonderful writer. Thank you for this.

wow great story please keep writing.

This is really beautiful. Is there gonna be more? I hope so, I loved it ;)

PLEASE UPDATE YOUR NejiTen FIC "The Ingenious Novice" .Its best NejiTen ever fic .

Awww really cute, is this the end or are there more?...Because if there are more I will read them :)