| Reviews for I Believe I'm Not in Cyrodill Anymore |
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   Haldir639 chapter 5 . 7/15/2014 I lol'd. More please :P |
| Cakes Blargh chapter 4 . 3/18/2013 You know, I like the concept you have here. The Madgod!Hero of Kvatch and the Dragonborn. Why aren't there any of those fics?! Oh, when you put in dialogue, try not to make it a paragraph, especially the mad rambling. Put breaks between in, such as describing the character's face and emotion. e.g: "...Or is it vast... Or wide... Or skinny... Or gigantanormous," Sigmund voiced, his thoughtful face constrast sharply to his usual manic grinning face, "I propose until that day where you can get up..." and blah, blah. Plus you did a good characterization. I approved that small detail of the teardrops in the book. Though mad, it shows he's pretty much a pal/bro whatever to Martin. And there's not enough of those on Fanfic. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/22/2012 but the hero of kvatch is strong :( |
| loveinyou chapter 5 . 10/22/2012 i must ask when will you have them meet up with the pepole that he knows? |
| Wh1teShad0w chapter 4 . 8/6/2012 This is a good fic, can't wait for he update :) |
| OmniGawker chapter 4 . 8/5/2012 Well, things aren't going well for the current daedric prince of madness but let's see if anything else interesting will come up in the future |
| CrazyClogs8 chapter 4 . 8/4/2012 Hee hee hee. Love it! |
| Cirtiin chapter 4 . 7/31/2012 Good chapter. I think that he should be more insane though XD But I like where the stories goin so far. If I may, I think the best way to send Sigmund back to his time would be to use the Elder Scroll you learn Dragonrend with since it's a time one. |
| Wh1teShad0w chapter 3 . 7/21/2012 This is pretty damn interesting. I also have an idea, maybe the duo go to solitude and meet Sheogorath there? Maybe cause havoc with the Wabbajack? |
| Lo Zin chapter 1 . 7/20/2012 This is a great premise, and I really enjoy the madness in the writing so far. |
| OmniGawker chapter 3 . 7/20/2012 God help us all if there are two Sheogoraths O.O' |
| BROvolone chapter 3 . 7/20/2012 Now this is funny. I like how you take the how madgod thing serious by... well acting mad, anyway you've already spoiled me with this story, I demand more! |
| Wh1teShad0w chapter 1 . 7/13/2012 This looks nice :) |
| Cirtiin chapter 2 . 6/29/2012 Real good story so far, but the chapters are a little short. Might wanna make them longer, about 5 pages in Microsoft Word at 12point font does the trick. :) I hope you post another chapter soon. |
| DeathMay chapter 1 . 6/24/2012 Very good concept. Bit confusing at some points but I can follow. Keep at it and expand the idea! For it is a good one. |
