Reviews for Asphyxia
Miranda393 chapter 1 . 1/14/2019
Is it weird that I actually cried during this? Well, ok, the tears didn’t actually exit my eyes but STILL, that’s a pretty unbelievable reaction to a story, for me anyway. And I’m pretty sure my nose got runny! I have no idea why I’m sharing this. Anyway.
keep-swinging chapter 1 . 9/7/2017
The panic suits Nightwing more than it should.
It fits well with his character and 99% sure if Young Justice was a legit teenager show we would've gotten a variation of this scene. I feel like there was something there between Nightwing and Artemis, but what I don't know. I'll ship them anyway. XD

Awesome writing, awesome story, (spot-on emotions, no mistakes) awesome job.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/10/2016
Dude... the last two lines, they killed me. I almost bawled my eyes out!
Katlyna chapter 1 . 6/27/2015
I just love your writing style. You do such a good job creating those feelings of panic, sadness and anger. I always enjoy reading your writing!
AlyssOfTheIsle chapter 1 . 4/11/2015
Heart wrenching! That was so intense! Really well written! Sequel?
TheImaginativeFox chapter 1 . 7/27/2014
Poor Dick :( It was so hard on him, but nobody completely understood, and Wally just left him by himself. Through the entire second season, I just wanted them to have a bonding moment and make up.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/12/2014
it was a great and sad story but you did an excelent job.
ahhhhh.okay chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
I feel like I got stabbed in the heart
mimosa eyes chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
Fishsticks, this was a lovely and painful read. While I will say that the conversation between Dick and Artemis was an excellent (albeit highly angsty) character study, I felt it was a little one-sided. Still, I can really imagine this happening. I enjoy these stories that can take place between episodes without disrupting canon. You managed to toe the line between dramatic-and-corny, and heartwrenching.
dreamarcher chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
You have me crying. Oh my god. It's official. IT'S OFFICIAL, -insert your name here-! I SHIP THEM I SHIPTHEMISHIPTHEMISHIPTHEM I thought I never would in a million years BUT NOW IT'S OFFICIAL I SHIP THEM

Okay, calming down...
Seriously, this story was so good it made me cry. So powerful. You created it so well. Nightwing is so perfect. So is Artemis. The whole thing. It's a f*cking masterpiece. I love you. I love this. I LOVE IT. gtg crying from feels
shadowcatbrat918 chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
Amazing, really sad but brilliantly written, it really drew me in, I was almost hoping for an ending (Even though the season isn't over yet) where she comes back just so Dick could breathe again. I was honestly scared that he wouldn't be able to after Gar talked to him :(
Canadianvicky chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
oh my god... that was amazing and beautiful
im on the verge of tires
i absolutely loved it!
Muggle born 12 chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
i really liked this story
Purple Majestic chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
I like this idea you started on.
ohpeetapatter chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
I honestly think you are one of the most amazing fanfiction authors out there. Just.. the emotion that's been displayed in one single chapter of writing.

I literally have no words to describe how I'm feeling. Your writing is incredible, and your portrayal of both Artemis and Dick is just so perfect. Every time I read your fics I fall more and more in love with Traught.

Gah, just all the feels. They're catching up to me. Just watching that EPISODE was bad enough - and now this ? But I love it. I love it so much.

Please don't stop writing Traught fics. You're fantastic.
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