The poems were really beautiful. Everything was just what I was looking for. Continue writing this novel piece, pretty please?

I loved your story! I've always viewed Crona as a female although Crona has no absolute gender. Anyways, you did amazing on your story! LOVE YOU!

Love it!

I love this so frickin' much…keep up the good work!

I really like your story. It's so cute. Thank you so much for writing this. I honestly don't see many bad things in this fanfiction except I wish the kiss had not been french. That and the slight swearing. It's a nice story overall though.

OMG THIS IS AMAZING. HUGE CronaFem! Fan and even bigger KidXCrona

Oh my god, I LOVED THIS! Please make a sequel or something! I mean, I really enjoyed this! Wow! Man, you've GOTTA write more! XD

Yay! I live forever! XD that was actually good! I usually don't like to read the truth or dare fanfics bcus they're usually either crazy or dumb, but I really did like this one! XD

Cute. I think that this story needs to be longer. Just so I can enjoy it more

wow your writing is superb!

This. Was. ADORABLE 3
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Wow... it jst keeps getting bettr and BTTR!

I LOV E THIS! OH GOSH THT WAS JST AMAZING! And Percy Jackson rocks... I never saw Rick Riordans way as a style though. I just saw it as first person like how now hes doing Third Person Omni.

I like this :)

Well damn? I didn't know reviews gave immortality...damn cars XD
I like how you did this, all the characters were very IC (in character) I love stories like that the most...