OMG. Tiny Terminator. I LOVE it.

Bravo

Madly paced and plotted and impossible to stop before the final chapter. Well done:-)

Amazing story. Loved every second of it :)

Wow that was so fantastic!

Wow! I am so glad I asked which story came before "Mai-Tai's..." Because this was amazing! Tomorrow I am going back to it with the background! Thank you for sharing!

Wonderful plot, excellent and well-defined original characters, well written (although you need to check your spelling) but left me a tad confused. If Danny is really that capable why was he always waiting for Steve or somebody to save the day? You wrote a very larger than life super hero Steve. Have to love a character that amazing.

it was truly a Wild Ride Loved it Thank You !

Wow! That was amazing .

Danny was a Bad ass now and back in Jersey it seems. Plus he had a life and abilities Steve never knew about or that where in any file about him.
And Cahill is a scary guy. Hope he does get reprogrammed and never can get to Danny or anybody friends/family of Danny's

Wowzers...there should be warnings posted at the beginning of this rollercoaster...but then that would take away the fun. Loved it. Awesome.

Oh man, it took me a few days to get through this one. That was a wild ride and it was amazing. The writing was excellent and the plot... Oh man that was intense. Good intense. Great job!

Just finished reading your amazing story. This one totally kept me on the edge of my seat the whole way thru. I love the way you portrayed Danny and Steves relationship and the side of of Danny we don't get to see very often. Just glimpses of a different man from a different time in Jersey. I love the strength of their characters and the twisted and crazy plot. Really love seeing a different side of Danny and what he's capable of doing. He got a lot of credit there! Even Steve wasn't sure about him. You really kept me guessing and really trying to figure it all out! Your details throughout the storyline were amazing! Love the last few chapters! What an ending! Thankyou!

I just came upon this story recently, so I wasn't reviewing chapter by chapter, but I have to say that this was just phenomenal. The plot was intricate, complex, exciting, and well-crafted. I felt as if I were reading a best-selling suspense novel. This is definitely up there with the best of the best Hawaii 5-0 fanfiction stories. You did an incredible job.

This was the most epic awesome 5-0 piece I'm positive I will ever read. I felt like I was reading a script for their movie! Fantastic work on all fronts, and I am now going to check out the rest of your work, maybe even your published Sci-Fi stuff

That was mean, mean, mean. It's 2:39am here and I'm an emotional wreck after that last chapter, not nice. Anyway just there now, a brilliant story. Thank you.