uhhh... it was insanely good except the words you used for a penis. I'm sorry, I can't stand rod or legendary rod or poll or terms you would find at a raunchy middle aged women's sap story were they have something against dick or cock. it turns me off. Good story though

Loved it. A sequel would be awesome

Oh I'm hoping there is more. I'll check your page to see if you continued.
Thx for sharing this fic.

That was delicious.

and it just gets hotter.

Holy smokes batman...that was the hottest thing I've read.

Edward should just kick Emmett's ass and kidnap Jake, and let that be that.

awesome love it!

ohhh my

oh my!

I think youre squel be about emment and eward leaving thier mates for jacob and letting him move into the cullen house and how, thier be afterwards. Oh, you should add how the valtuirot feels about Jacob and his connetion with the cullens that would be cool. And How Bella and Rosalie are out for Jacob, for stealing thier mates. That would be awesome for a squel, all this together should be about a good 15-20 chapters.

Poor Edward.
Atleast he got something out of it though. He shouldn't give up so quickly though...
Anyways, I def wouldn't mind a sequel.
That was a great read.

I loved the story and would def read the sequel. Im interested in seeing if seth approaches jake about the encounter. Poor edward may not be Jake's favorite but he still was satisfied. Love this story.

OMG! YES, PLEASE! WITH SUGAR AND CREAM AND BOYZ ON TOP!

Oh yes, please do a sequel to this story, I love me some hot Jacob/Emmett action as well as Paul/Seth smut.