This is the absolute best Naruto fan fiction I have read in years. Keep up all the good work and don't listen to any haters!

Maybe update the stories people care about before writing other garbage. All you morons do this. No one gives a shit.

Also, remove the message about how you're getting money for this stuff. You can't finish any of it, why are you asking to be paid for it? Dumbass.

Nah, he is OP. You've made the retard mistake of making him unable to be fought with literally anything. He can somehow absorb and then use Sagemode and Bijuu chakra.

No wonder you abandoned this, retard. You're too fucking stupid to write anything coherent.

Well that was a retarded ending to a chapter. That's not foreshadowing, that's you hamfisting bullshit in. This seemingly unknown time travel just that only bijuu knew of seems to have been known by a dozen random people.

I know you abandoned this, because you're a retard, but come on. You've already ruined the story here. Nothing matters anymore. No one can trust you, because ALREADY the whole point of this story has been ruined.

you know what i juat realized every chapter up to 48(the ff has only 48 chapters as of now) starts with re- except for chapter 1 and chapter 20.

please no sasusaku fic i ewould much rather sasunaru or hack even sasugaara(was there ever a sasugaara fic?i cant remember one not even in the summaries).

normally i hate it if multple people go to the past(not only in naruto but other ff too) but these 3 are the only ones i would let go back together(and in harry potter harry and luna). had there been a sakura that went back too i would have dropped. great ff so far.

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Hi! This is one of the best fanfics I’ve ever come across. Keep going!

This is probably going to be another story that may not get finished. It isn't bad so far, but you have a lot going on that is potentially a long way from being resolved. Another thing that was just weird was Sasuke's change from evil to good relatively quickly. On a side note, if the site you are posting on is blocking a word, it might not be a bad idea not to refer to it. By all means write original fiction then refer to where it is, and then people can decide if they want to obtain it.

Thanks for the hard work love the story _

Thanks for the hard work love the story _

Ah, I just saw it's been a couple years since you updated.
Nothing wrong with that! I'm just a little sad.
I love this whole idea. The concept is great and very well-done. I approve of what you've done. Anyway, just letting you know that there are still readers for it.
Thank you for your time.

All of the reasons Naruto gave should be the same for Sakura. Sasuke should also see her as an innocent kid but one that never knew any suffering. This Sakura has not had any time to grow and mature. In a matter of short months you made her go from rabid fangirl to understanding and mature. Doesn't make sense or show any personal growth. You are already showing Sasuke to notice her as an attractive female without him being a mature probably 18 year old looking at an actual 13 year old which I would believe would be more realistic. Even if he is finally actually looking at her you are ignoring his past life experience. Five years is a long time when you are a teenager. Maybe I am seeing this so clearly because I have nieces and nephews who are between 13 - 21. I see how they interact. The Sakura at this time has no real life experience to compare for her to suddenly be so accepting of Sasuke's past. I am confused about why she is not thinking about how he basically admitted to slaughtering her family and everyone she has ever known in her isolated little world. This Sakura's only real combat experience was Wave and she didn't even fight. The way she just accepts everything that she can't imagine the actual suffering of doesn't make her seem mature or smart if anything it makes her seem like a child reacting to some fantastic and sad story. She has no depth and I'm kind of surprised that Sasuke is not seeing her as shallow. Especially since she was extremely shallow at this age in the past. It seems she is being forced into the person she became after losing her teammates, one to abandonment and the other to years of a training trip, and going through harsh physical and mental training from Tsunade. She is not that person and without 3 years of strict exposure to a strong female with a tough attitude like Tsunade she is just a fangirl who thinks she knows better. She needs time to grow on her own as do the rest of the rookies and Gaara's siblings. Try to think of the difference in Itachi's power and ability in the original timeline compared to how Sasuke was at 13 and Sakura doesn't even have half of the strength and training that Sasuke had. Naruto and Sasuke telling her she would make a good chunin now and that she is strong is similar to them putting her alone in charge of some genin (a chunin is expected to lead) and then possibly being confronted by any of their powerful enemies. With the enemies they are facing I'd think they would be trying to find ways to get the rookies in a safer position and more training and that includes Sakura. It seems she is being dragged along with some taijutsu training from Sasuke and some gengutsu from Kakashi. Peacetime chunin maybe but they are going to war. The rest of the genin are going to have to step up their training and quickly or there are going to be many deaths and it will be impossible for Naruto, Sasuke, Shikamaru and Shino to protect them all. They just have too many enemies who actually know some of their weaknesses. I'm looking forward to reading more

Great story! Love the characterization and the relationships between the travelers. Hoping for an update soon!