| Reviews for Unwelcomed Arrangements |
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Luna chapter 13 . 8/20 Don't get me wrong- I LOVE this fanfic. But just one correction in the midst of all this utter perfection(wow that rhymes!); Morgause has brown eyes not blue. |
gaylelbf chapter 26 . 12/3/2019 Complex story with many characters from different worlds. Often smutty. Interesting. |
NCVII chapter 26 . 6/24/2019 Sooooooooooo... I'm finally done with this story and can I just say amazing job i loved mostly every second of it and like how you brought everyone together at the end. Oh and the whole And arise the setting sun for now the water and earth can become one is an AMAZING LINE in fact after writing this review I'm going to have it on my insta bio. Gods this has been a wild ride and I loved it I am going to read the short sequels although not yet I need a break. Also you defo deserve those cookies and an award for such a good story! |
NCVII chapter 24 . 6/24/2019 I'm dying here. you really got Merlin to tell Morgana to shut up then kiss her. Some damn good writing |
NCVII chapter 18 . 6/23/2019 reading the A/N I agree. Merlin gave way too much of his happiness and in the end he has nothing to show for it he's lost 2 people who arguably knows him completely another who finally gets to know him(Gwaine and Lance are the 2 people who know him completely and Arthur is the one who finally knows) . He gives up Morgana and has to kill her someone he clearly and I would argue loved and cared for. He loses Mordred someone who could've been like a son to him if not an apprentice or close friend. And heck magic and this supposed kingdom isn't even United and he's left to be a lonely old man. Damn the shows ending is dark asf |
NCVII chapter 17 . 6/23/2019 Its almost like you noticed my discomfort in the past cause boom here we are. here's the writing I fell in love with about 10hrs ago possibly less idk when o stated reading |
NCVII chapter 16 . 6/23/2019 Gonna be honest totally wanted to see Merlin just go crazy and just fuck on everyone. I feel as though I've been blue balled |
NCVII chapter 15 . 6/23/2019 I'm really confused as to why so much talk of God came into this story. like I understand if it's your faith but personally never been one for it and i just feel off when one of my favourite passions in life is spoken like it should be sacrosanct and blessed from the whole animalistic crazy free writing of not so long ago |
NCVII chapter 14 . 6/23/2019 Yeah this whole jesus talk is too much... |
NCVII chapter 14 . 6/23/2019 here's where the story branches to the dreaded religion place. also I swear magic comes from the triple gem goddess? I mean Britain's religion originally was Druidic which contained stuff like the Triskllieon. Gonna be honest I get really ify when you bring religion in... Yeah... I'm already not liking this whole jump into religion |
NCVII chapter 12 . 6/23/2019 Ah there it is. Merlins version of Olenna Tyrell, The Queen Of Shade, the one, the only HUNITHHHHHHHH! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO |
NCVII chapter 12 . 6/23/2019 Just had to pause here a say ofc Merlin would say exactly what I was thinking. Damn you're good... here's more virtual cookies |
NCVII chapter 11 . 6/23/2019 Haha this authors note. I would love to send you cookies to more than deserve it but for now enjoy some virtual cookies |
NCVII chapter 10 . 6/22/2019 Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh! I AM SO FUCKING EXCITED FOR THIS CONFRONTATION AND CAN I JUST SAY YOUR MERGANA SCENE WAS IMPECCABLE! Heck the way you wrote that scene is like word for word what I would've and what I wanted to see you must have telepathic abilities cause damn it was great. And dare I say you are one of the best writers I've ever had the pleasure of reading from. Like I get the whole you're using established characters but you've given more than enough of a spin and change and it's just soooooo good. Like I wish you could've been a writer for Merlin I would've been way more contempt. You should 10000000% take up writing an actual book hell I'll help you with it as it means I'll get to read your amazing writing first.. Ah I'm gonna try end the whole brown-nosing as I don't want to give you too big of an ego(but all I'm saying is you more than deserve the praise I just gave you and you defo deserve recognition) |
NCVII chapter 9 . 6/22/2019 Man, I love your author notes at the end cause they just ditto how I feel. And hey about the multi chapter thing you're doing a great job and character building really is needed otherwise it's just a time skip which leaves one confused. Anyways amazing chapters and yes I've been binge reading and haven't slept due to this. Don't judge me lol this is just too good to put down! |