Terrific short story! Very compelling. Awesome!

That was so good! I love this plot line~

I love the premise! And Sookie is such a good soul.

I agree with every other reviewer. This was awesome and would make a fantastic story. I hope you make it into a full length story!

I loved the different circumstances in this story. Very interesing approach. Thank you for a great chapter und good luck with the contest. I hope you will continue this story:-)

fantastic shake up for cannon.

Great chapter, could be a very nice story, hope you continue after the contest. Thanks

This was simply wonderful. I would hope to see this continue after the contest is over. Good luck!

Awesome chapter! I loved it! Please more! Please:D

I really enjoyed this story, and didn't want it to end.

This is good. Even though she was attacked she still left clothes for him. She even knew he was out there watching. She's got guts. I would really like more.

Great o/s! Please continue!

Argh I just want more. Great o/s!

This is such a good story with so much potential, please expand. :D

More please.