Please update this story! I never write reviews or comments on a story before but I love this story so much. Please update chapter 32 and please please continue with this story!

I love this story so much! Please please continue this story! I usually never write reviews of comments but I am writing one now. That clearly shows how much I love this story! Please please update chapter 32!

This is the first time I read story about oc twins it not that bad it is one of the better one what I don't get Is twins oc older slibing I mean Yuma got older sister in
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That little turd Cole; I hope the group gets his butt arrested and he gets what's coming to him - something where Daddy and Mommy's money can't help him (and no not death but prison or some other form of mega karma)

HOLY CRAP! YUSEI CAMEOS!

I wonder if Jaiden and Yugi (If not their descendants) will too O.O

question; is it basically a balance thing; since Astral and Astrid are from the astral world and Yumi and Yuma are humans if all 4 fail; one twin from each set dies; in this case Astral and Yumi where as Yuma and Astrid will be fine if not emotionally crushed?

Hello so I like this story or something amazing I hope you keep working on it oh and I was wondering when will be the next chapter please answer when you can

Its dead isn't it ಥಥ

Are you going to continue this story?

this is a good story buuut...you can't actually see black holes.

was hoping for number 93 then again she doesn't;t like being compared to her brother

Hey! Nice to talk to you again. We haven't reviewed in a while but here it is so. . .

Gaara no Mirokai- THAT. WAS. AWESOME!

Astral- Hey! That's my line!

Gaara- I do agree with Mirokai. Quite an interesting plot twist.
Observation #365- Apparently there are other things in the world besides blue glowing flashlights like my sister Astral, crazy split personality psychos like my other personality/sister Mirokai, and strange know it all older brothers who have the ability to control sand, otherwise known as me.

And yes, I am the oldest, Astral is the middle sibling, and Mirokai is my youngest sister. Subsequently I am the only boy.

Astral- By the way, unlike most 'blue glowing flashlights' I actually wear clothes.

Gaara no Mirokai- Yeah like the panties you left in big bro's room a few days ago!

Astral- SHUT UP MIRO!

Gaara- If I recall correctly Mirokai, your panties and your bra are in my room right now. You know, the ones with the pink lace all over them?

Gaara no Mirokai- GAAAAH!

Astral- Um, can we stop this conversation? Anywho, yeah, we loved this chapter, so there you go.

In the backround:

Gaara no Mirokai- Gaara come back here! God dammit let me kill you!

Gaara- (running for his life) Observation #366- Do not talk about your sister's undergarments on the internet, or she will try and kill you.

WHAT UP! I AM DOING THE REVIEWING THIS TIME! So let me get in a word before Astral or Mr Smarty-Pants aka Gaara and say. . . THAT WAS AWESOME!

Astral- Hey, Astral here, now I think we need to change who is similar to who on here,just to clarify. I'm like Yumi, Miro is like Astrid, and-

Gaara- Excuse me, sorry for butting in on your conversation, but I seemed to have misplaced my Ai necklace, it is very important, and-

Astral- Alright, alright! Go check with Miro, she probably stole it.

Gaara- I am gratified. Thank you for your help, Astral. By the way, your panties are in my soul room again, you seem to have left them there from the nightmare you had a few nights ago.

Astral- GAARA!

Gaara no Mirokai-HAHAHAHAHAHA! Welp, we're gonna sign of now. By the way, my favorite character is Astrid.

Astral- I like Yumi.

Gaara- I prefer Astral out of all of the protagonists.

Astral and Gaara no Mirokai- STOP USING SUCH BIG WORDS!

Hey! I just found this story and I am so happy! Have I reviewed before? I have two other usernames, so, if some body either named Gaara or Gaara no Mirokai has commented on this story please tell me cause those are my other personalities, so yeah, I'll stop now, bye bye!

PS. Gaara no Mirokai- OH MY GOD! Astrid sounds so much like somebody I know *cough Astral cough*

Astral-Quit it! This is supposed to be MY review!

Gaara- Remind me why I still haven't killed you two yet?

Astral and Gaara no Mirokai- YOU STAY OUT OF THIS!

Gaara- Most intriguing.

Astral- As you can see, we each have a sort of personality to someone in this story. Even though my name is Astral I identify more to Astrid. According to a CERTAIN SOMEONE!

Gaara no Mirokai-What!?

Astral- I think Miro is more like Yuma. HEY MIRO, WE'RE CHANG ING YOUR NAME TO YUMA!

Gaara no Mirokai- NO, YOUR NOT!

Astral- And to wrap this up, Gaara identifys with Astral, the real one, not me. ( Though my name IS Astral)

Anywho, sorry for taking up your time like this, but review you later!

Gaara no Mirokai-BYE BYE!

Gaara- Farwell until next review.

I absolutely love your story! I love your consept of putting in Yuma's twin, Yumi, into the storyline. And ignore all of the very critical comments because it is a wonderful story! I really hope you continue this! Btw my username is the name of one of my original cards, ' Azthmira, the Galactic Empress' Anyways, talk to you later~!