B3 Too cute! Well done!

Next time try having more dialogue, other than that good job

The story was good but you need to take a little time reading it and making it flow. It seemed a little bit rushed to me and all you really need is better flow and conversations. Plus, it was a little ooc for me and I think you need to make them not like each other at first and then start falling for each other with obstacles in the way. But other than that it was good. :)

It's a good story, really, but I noticed Natasha was little out of character. You could improve your writing skills more a little bit (as there is always room for improvement) and there were some minor punctuation mistakes, but overall it's a pretty good story.

ya im new to this so i dont know what a squeal is :)

Good job just one problem... There's no squeal!

is it finished? no wait theres more oh i don't know haha loved that natasha punched tony but she could have waited for him to actually do something stupid first.

ah omg steve! shocked didn't think he would get impaled by a telephone pole. poor natasha having to watch steve die (can steve die he's got that super thing going on so he should be able to heal quicker than normal people right?)anyway really looking forward to seeing what happens to steve? great three chapters :D

I really like this so far. Are you planning on making this a full story?

Hey this is the aurthor and I wanted to say that this is

MY first anything fanfic and I need to know if i did good or if I need to change anything and I do not own any of these characters so this is also my disclaimer