Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!

Awe! They're so cute!

Awe!

Amazing!

Poor Haruhi!

Loved it! Poor girl!

Ermygerd lurv it. Might wanna proofread for the little crammer mistakes, but I'd be a hypocrite of I demanded it. I hate proof reading to be honest. I just wanna write it and be done. Love it still keep it up

Very steamy!

OMG! I love this. Your story had me laughing so hard _ I can't wait to see what happens next. P.S. I like your author's notes I think they are hilarious.
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damn it get it finshed already i like this story they make a very good cople they balence each other out

oh my gosh this fic is hilarious though I would have already gave Jason thbeat down if he hit the part with the clock was hilarious I fell off my bed,
great fic .

Your storyline is good but you need to seriously fix your grammatical errors and better your sentence structure. Also take into consideration Haruhi's injuries, if she has broken ribs and a bruised face, Takashi can't pull and grab her however he pleases. Its a good idea to play on the gentle side, plus, it adds more to your chapter's depth if he notices he's hurting her or is cautious about adding pain to her already injured body. You have potential with this story so just work on your execution and it'll be great.

... Why everybody thinks that Russian is cool? ...
I AM FROM RUSSIA AND I HATE MY F****** ACCENT!

P.S. This story isn't bad...

This turned into a really steamy story. I'm glad Haruhi was able to get away from that creep and be helped by Takashi. :)

awe, more chapters please! ;)