Speechless...

NEED THAT SEQUEL!
Srsly.

Oooh...nice, very nice. But really sad-Amon's spirit trapped forever on the earth, always reincarnating, while Korra's moved on. I like the "Curse of Korra" idea you had at the end-she never leaves Amon's thoughts, even after countless deaths and reincarnation. Plus it's kinda cool and creepy.

beautiful...

This makes a lot more sense thanAmon's actual backstory. Good job!

Wow. ... Wow. That was amazing! Such a fantastic twist on the mythology. I really enjoyed this.

Very interesting. Certainly a different spin off from LoK. I like the concepts of the non-brnder world you came up with if Korra did in fact lose. I couldn't find any grammar mistakes or misspellings. Anyway I liked it and the structure in which you had written it. Well just keep on writing.

love it alot

This was AWESOME and legitimately HEARTBREAKING!

I love the incorporation of reincarnation. There seems to be an emerging theme of Korra and Amon finally finding love, without secrecy, in their next incarnation. Starcrossed lovers seem to promote karmic justice! Anyway, the writing here was superb, elegant and touched with depth. It's almost like a fine-woven tapestry, where the individual threads, though seemingly unrelated, coalesce together to create a greater picture. Mon Te-hi, in particular, proved to be a fascinating character, and it was fantastic following his journey to discovery.

Honestly, I couldn't have read a better oneshot for Amorra. Thank you for this amazing fic. :)

I love it! SOOO much better then the original. :)

Oh
Wow.
Seriously, this is just breathtaking. Wow.
This story is really good. Really really good.
Please update soon, and keep writing!

I so agree with twinkletoast's review!

I love Tenzin's theory. It sounds like it really could of been plausible in the show, if Amon wasn't born prior to
Aang's death and wasn't actually a waterbender, etc.

I love your writing. It really flowed and you transferred the story you envisioned in your mind into words in a way that your ideas were easy to understand; it is very mature writing and satisfying to read.

Thank you for writing this. :)

I read this a few days ago on my phone, so I apologize for not having reviewed earlier.

But gosh. I was SO impressed. Beyond impressed. The character Mon Te-Hi did not leave me feeling disappointed about how he is an OC. He is much more than just a mere OC. The way you portray him is absolutely stunning. Really.

From his humble beginnings to his magnificent rise to celebrity to his eventual confusion, everything was just so well written. Poignant. Beautiful, even. Mon Te-Hi reminded me of Amon A LOT, which I believe was your intention anyway... so great job with that. I had this small bit of hope that "Amon" would meet "Korra" but somehow, that lingering bit of mystery and sadness was just as satisfying.

And I mean it, because this story has been on my mind for about a week now. I just couldn't pass it by without reviewing it properly. You definitely deserve it.

...AND YOU DEFINITELY should write that one-shot sequel. :) Please? Or better yet, some kind of short series would be great. :D

Anyway, great job once again. This is definitely one of my favorite OC-based stories ever. But really, Mon Te-Hi doesn't count as an OC 'cuz he's actually sexy, badass Amon. ;)

-tt

Oh wow. I like your veiw on Amon and Korra. I do believe something like this can truly happen to the Avatar. Both of them are very much like Yin and Yang. Always trying to blance one other yet fighting one other. I do have to see the sequel, I know I want to read that one! I'll be sure to kept a eye out for it.