I love your story had a good story line! However if I may suggest leave out the commentary on what's going on and what's going to happen at the end of each chapter and at the beginning of each chapter! It kind of seems like you're giving spoilers to a movie and makes people almost not want to read I ended up skipping over your announcements just so I could get through the story I didn't want to know what was going to happen before I read it other than that great story I look forward to reading more

What the hell! Just last chapter Harry said Hermione was his first love and now he says Hermione is like my SISTER? What's wrong with him...

Why is Hermione coddling Ron like this? And also, Harry's an idiot for letting her go alone because he should have known that she'd be in danger

I know this story is already finished, but at this point of the story, your options would have been ministry to say what happened, or having the Wesley's over and heading to the ministry the next day.

Wow that was a great story keep up the good work

They wouldn't call it candy they'd call it chocolate.

Why the heck are they crlebrating thanks giving for they are English that's an American holiday?

I think you need to re edit the ages/times scales as they don't add up factoring in the time they were away their Childs age and the months she would of Beeb pregnant.
You also change point of you aboutv3/4 times in this one chapter It makes things very confusing.
It a shame cause other than the above this is a good story.

Hoe can she be 2? If they were gone for 2 years? And what are grits?

If they were gone for 2 years, and she would of been pregnant 9-10 months how old is their daughter? They way you have written her she seems way older than 14-15 months?

I really enjoyed reading this story. I loved how Ron came around in the end and accepted Hermione and Harry being together. The epilogue with Severus and Remus having a child with Severus carrying it... really weird and clearly not realistic and beyond my spectrum of fictional belief. Other than that, a nice story. :o)

Amazing story. A different take on what happens after Voldemort's fall. The kidnapping and the torture was very interesting idea. It was a good thing that Pansy and Draco saved them. Their daughter was really cute and I enjoyed reading about her as the adventure kept going. She is pretty smart for being a two year old and it is agreeable as she is Hermione's daughter. Remus and Snape getting together was a surprise but don't mind as they love each other very much. Feel bad for Teddy as he would miss Tonks at times.

The Weasleys took the news pretty well. Except for Ron. It is reasonable as he did wait for a long time for her, but he isn't what she needs and loves anymore. When you go through a situation like that and someone close to you was with you then feelings do change. I'm glad that hey had hat talk and Ron was able to move on. The emotions shown were what allowed your audience understand the situation realistically and be able to see the changes that underwent with each character.

Who knew Hermione can be devious. At least she took care of the skeletons that haunted her and now she feels free. The epilogue was a nice way to show how everyone was doing. Glad that they are all happy now though. A lot of emotions flowed out with each situation and was amazingly written. Thank you. Keep up the good work.

Great story, need to check a couple things such as the length of pregnancy. I was hoping they have more kiddos but glad they want more, great story

I thought harry has loved her in a romantic way for a long time.

I loved this and I would love to read any other Harmony fic you decide to read. I am not a fan of slash and your relationship with Remus and Snape was one I could handle and live with in the story. I actually think they made a cute couple. I think you did a good job with the story and how you explained their healing process after their two years of being tortured and then readjusting back to the real world was well done. I loved the character or Arielle and I think she was a great addition to helping them cope with what they were going through. The fact she was the product of a forced rape and then brought Harry and Hermione together and allowed them to realize their true feelings for one another was great.
The reactions of the others when they came back was very well done and though I think Ginny would have acted more like Ron I do honestly think you handled that part very well. The way everyone stood behind them was great, though I would have like to have seen Harry pummel Percy for being the usual prat he is. I enjoyed the way you put obstacles in the way of their life and didn't make it all sunshine and birds singing. A little angst is good for a story and you gave that to us in the form of the revenge seeking Death Eaters.
Now I did like the Epilogue and showing that they got past the things they were forced to live through and then made a happy and enjoyable life was very well done. I would definitely read another Harmony fic if you were to write it but I regret to say I doubt I will read something where she is not paired with Harry, personal preference. Again Good fic and Thank you for sharing.