Too sweet for words! Sportsmaster being... well... a father. XDD

Lawerence. Banging on the wall. L. O. L. Overall, one of the best I've read.

That was great and soooo cute

OMIGOD! OMIGOD! THIS IS TOO CUTE!
I'm melting... My bed... I'm... Oh god... hep me! ;3
Love this fic! this is really great!
See Ya.

-Juh

Love it B)

Love it. I really hope he can be with his family again in the show.

Can you make a Lawrence/Paula or Sportsmaster/Huntress fanfics! :D

You're really good bringing out the dynamic of these two.

Oh, this was so cute. I love Papa Crock when he's given his humanity, and you're a good writer, so it was a joy to read. Great work. :)

HA dislike of redheads

Awesome talk with Jade and how after the 'talk' he was there for them

Yeah I really see Sportsmaster going after Aqualad unless Black Manta covers it up

Oh boy he used her middle name to scold her

Wow it didn't really hit me until it was pointed out Sportsmaster is his father-in-law

Don't even think about it HA

But really with her parents in the next room kind of takes away the romantic intimacy I mean if it's been while I get they want each other but still

Thank you for writing this story. It seems like every time I have no love for a certain character, I wander over to fanfiction. There, some wonderful author keeps their character and their relationships intact and makes me like them. Thanks for several things: including Rocket, the mental image of Sportsmaster going all out on Kaldur, Lawrence's handling of boyfriends...

I don't really have any iseful critiques to give, I just wanted to let you know that this is a good story.