This is great, I just found out about the series and I plan on making my own fanfiction. Wonderful job.

I LOVE THIS SERIES! I wish more people knew about it! I REALLY ENJOYED THIS AND I'LL BE WATCHING THIS FIC! Just write anything with Marin and and Melan! Like them having a child together, Melan getting jealous, or something humorous! Anything as long as it revolves around these two! :-3

I love it. The lack of captalization was annoying, but everything else was perfect. I would love to see more.

This is quite a pleasant read—as it explores Melan, Moe, and Marin’s relationship further than the anime would let. On top of it all, every character is written quite well.