It made me cry poor Oberyn

i dont think you really understood oberyn. at least not in the same way i did.

very well done. Great writing! Oberyn is becoming a fast favorite of mine. xD You captured him really well, and Doran, and Ellaria and Nym.

Congratulations on this well told little story.

Yes. It was ironic really.

But doesn't Ellaria have several children.
Love the acquisition of poison scene.

I love Oberyn's anger at this. Having said that, I think a number of Oberyn's children where conceived after Elia's death.

Oberyn is awesome in this.

Oh, just tear out my heart, why don't you?

Excellent conversation between brothers. Just beautiful.

Ha! An Oberyn story. Sounds promising. I can't wait to see how Oberyn reacts to Doran's plans (when he finally gets to know about them, I mean). Keep writing.