You wrote a kinda dark professor layton story and a suicidal bruce banner one- my two favourite types of fanfiction. Thanks heaps! (My taste is a little dark, I'll admit.)
Keep writing and I look forward to reading more of your stuff! Thanks!

I really like the imagery in this, and the thought process he goes through. Well done :)

Wow. That's all I can say WOW. You know I think you got into his mindset perfectly .. Those seem like the exact reasons Bruce would have and exactly how he would go about doing it. ever since that part in the Avengers when he admitted to having tried killing himself I knew it would result it great fanfiction and I was right! Truly great job it made me want to cry :')

WOW! Amazingly written, probably one of the best fics I've ever read! Out of all the ways Bruce trying to commit suicide could be written, this was by far the best way to go about it. This fic has real emotion to it, and is just... perfect! I honestly don't have any way to descirbe how well this is written!

I loved how you showed what Bruce was thinking, and, oh the whole atmosphere was perfect for this kind of scenario! All up, great job and please continuing writing amazing fics like this in the future!

I really liked this fanfic! Bruce banner is my favorite character and so far, out of all the fanfics I've read about Bruce committing suicide, this one is by far my favorite! It seemed the most realistic as to what had happened and what was running thruogh Bruce's mind when he did it. I really hope you can make this a multi-chapter, that would be AMAZING! There aren't enough Bruce fanfics out there. :D