absolutely brilliant!

Lovely story!

OH. My Gosh.

Ohmygoshalmighty! *Never* have I spontaneously written a review out of sheer and complete excitement immediately after only reading the first chapter of a story, and -as you might rightfully imagine- it is both with bafflement and delight that I’m doing so right now.

What an amazing start. I’m not even sure what to say! The pacing, the setting, Hook’s unexpected and mysterious return, the noble and heartwarming allusion to Peter Pan found in Wendy’s oldest son- and, oh dear, the astoundingly clever and jaw-dropping reveal of the second boy’s name!... This was the exact moment where I decided, or rather should I say realized, that this was going to be quite a fabulous and memorable story. Your vocabulary is absolutely superb and the characters’s interactions, as well as personalities, are so far admirably well handled.

You can assuredly expect another review from me soon, because I can’t wait to see where this goes!

A wonderful fantastic story! My first Peter Pan story and I LOVED it! Well done, utterly brilliant read!

Officially sold on this pairing though I'm already very much fond of and very well done.

Great story

If you can see them, they can see you.

I have never read this pairing but I enjoy your stories so much I gave it a shot...I was absolutely blown away, this was a beautiful work with such wonderfully written imagery it was mind blowing. Your character development, growth, and change as well as you marvelous inclusion of the suffragettes was amazing.

thank you so much for sharing your wonderful talent for writing with us! Bravo on a beautifully written story!

loved it!

Loved this epilogue with Lillie. How sweet and adorable.

Oh man, I have loved every chapter of this story. I need to get me a pirate.
I couldn't stop reading this until it was finished. Thank you! I can't give back anything in return except I know how much writers cherish getting feedback and reviews, which is why i tried to review as many chapters as possible.

Every time I read one of your stories i think that that story is the very best, most awesome, most gripping one ever, but then I read the next one and so on. your talent is limitless and awe inspiring.
Amaze balls. Enormous thanks!

hehe I loved how he ripped her bodice - he IS a pirate after all. That scene was freaking hot.
Dramatic scenes in this chapter. Goddamn you write so well. I can't put this story down.

Damn i am jealous of Wendy - on a ship with her gorgeous lusty pirate captain. Loved the lemons here - actually loved the lemons throughout the story.

Oh the scenes of James with the children were so adorable. I'm just a big squashy mess of happiness.

Decisions, decisions, Wendy. i know what i would do!

So many fascinating twists and turns in this story.
I am so glad that I wasn't reading this when you were writing it because I would not be able to stand the suspense. I need instant gratification and this story is amaze balls. I can't stop reading it even though I should be in bed. (if only i had a pirate waiting for me there. sigh)

I am amazed at your ability to write such scorchingly hot sex scenes between Wendy and James and almost painfully cold, nauseating sex scenes with Jeremy. The contrast is so staggering. Your writing is so awe inspiring.
Poor Wendy trapped in such a marriage.