good story . for a better review please finish

I know it's been a super long time since you've written for this story, but in would really like too know how Liv and Mel get along when they move back in together. And how Liv does either in a new unit or with a new partner. Any chance of that happening? Please?

I wish you would update this wonderful story!

You should write more about this. I was sitting on the edge of my seat.

I love this because it makes Elliot a true asshole, I actually do think he is one from time to time and his just makes it even more ironic lol

uh no...

Ohhh finally Mel confronts Elliot. I hope Liv hears the B.S answer he got for Mel. Another great chapter :)

whoa I'm not surprised by Elliot's behavior. Ugh I hate him. I can't wait for more.

I am sooo pissed at Elliot! Nice twist :)

Ohh... I can't wait to see what's going down with Mel and Elliot! You know someone is going to have to step in !

I'm so sad. And this only reaffirms my beliefs that Elliot Stabler is a jackass. *smiles* more please. - BCI

Elliot is such an ass, of course everything works out for him, but he'll get bit in the ass sooner or later lol

He's a selfish son of a bitch. How can he not see that his partners hurting. Another great chapter

Boy I hope that Olivia and Melinda make up & get back together like now. I hate it when they fight or disagree.

Why can't she be, Elliot? I can't wait to find out!