| Reviews for The nanny |
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rosabella-blood chapter 7 . 12/22/2015 Please write a new chapter i need to know if they get together |
Guest chapter 7 . 6/13/2013 Its June now. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/10/2013 "What are they, ADHD or something?" HEY! I HAVE ADHD YOU KNOW! Tamaki having ADHD? THAT'S AN UNDERSTATEMENT! (Whatever that means...) |
Hikaoru13 chapter 7 . 5/16/2013 this is kinda like the movie au pair... but i like it anyway |
iHaterainbows chapter 7 . 2/11/2013 UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! XD I'm hooked with the story so update. :) |
A visitor chapter 7 . 1/12/2013 I applaud your desire to write creatively since it's obvious you have a vivid imagination. However, if you wish to find success among genuine readers, please polish your basics and use them. A fanfic voracious hormonal tween or obsessed fangirl may forgive gaffes or OOC depictions, but a selective reader will not (and which would you rather have appreciate your hard work as a writer - you decide). Also, understand your characters well by studying the original source material instead of relying on the characterizations of other writers and/or a confused sense of who they are as people. Please don't use an update to apologize for not updating. Please don't beg for approval or self-promote (EL James is a rare bird). You have potential, but it's being squandered. I hope you take this in the spirit in which it's written - concrit because you can do better. |
mspsychoknight chapter 7 . 1/7/2013 i hate but love you right know*tear* how could you |
xXxFuckOffXxX chapter 7 . 12/22/2012 Mmmmmmmmmmmmooooooooooorrrrr rrrrrrrreeeeeeeeee |
Mickeyursofine chapter 7 . 12/9/2012 NOOOOO! you're right, i was so excited for another chapter 'cause your story is so good!...Well, it's fine i guess. It's probably hard to find inspiration sometimes or the writing just doesn't come out. Just remember I'm cheering you on-but don't make that add to the pressure! Just write whenever and whatever you feel! XDD |
CrazyIsCreativeWriting chapter 6 . 12/4/2012 Omygosh sounds good an keep it up ciao! Sakura |
Mickeyursofine chapter 6 . 12/4/2012 this is so good! I love the plot and the story and everything! it's really amazing. and im not trying to be nice; it's actually a very interesting plot and i can't wait to see how it will progress XD |
Kiya319 chapter 5 . 11/25/2012 its good. the suspense of what the kids are going to do and how haruhi will react is killing me. |
Cinnamon Kelly chapter 5 . 11/6/2012 The chapters are amazing and the plot is intriguing. Keep up the good work! :) |
pandoravanity chapter 5 . 9/28/2012 hohohoo...sneaky little brats eh? cant wait when the pranks begin... |
just-the-narrator chapter 5 . 8/29/2012 cool chapter! the only real problem I saw is how it changes from first to third person in one part, but besides that, really good chapter! |