I challenge you to do a ash betrayal story, where he will catch all legendaries(including arceus!) and shipping will be aurumshipping ONLY none of his pokemon will betray him to. He will also be a poke master too in the story( ONLY AURUMSHIPPING, NO OTHER EVEN HAREM CANNOT, INCLUDING AMOURSHIPPING. ONLY AURUMSHIPPING)

could you make the pairing an ash/karen fic, please?

I'm oping for more chapters eventually :D. This story is doing great

Ha a horny caterpie that is funny

Hi shane1594, I just finished reading chapter 7 of your story, and I really like it. In fact, I need advice. I'm planning on making my own account pretty soon and I'm already working on my own series about Ash Ketchum called "Pocket Monsters' Angel". Its going to be a journey where Ash travels through all of the regions to become the world's Greatest Pokemon Master. However, the story is a little different than most stories about Ash. You see, there are a couple things. 1. Ash's first Pokemon is a Rapidash that he reveives from his father when Ash is six years old. Ash trains with Rapidash for 5 years before setting off on his journey the day he turns 11. When he starts his journey, Ash will have Rapidash, Poliwhirl, and Pichu with him. That Poliwhirl is the same Poliwag that scared Serena five years prior, and Pichu is the Pokemon Prof. Oak gives Ash. 2. Ash won't truly discover his Aura Guardian powers until he embarks on his journey in Sinnoh, where Riolu where be his first Sinnoh Pokemon as he starts his journey in Canalave City. 3. Ash's travel companions include his best friend Sabrina of the Saffron City Gym, his mentor Elite Four Trainer Agatha, Brock of Pewter City and Misty of Cerulean City, and Lt. Surge. Serena will be a recurring character that will appear when Ash makes calls to Kalos. 4. It will not be rushed, there will be lots of chapters, and the chapters will be particularly long. 5. Ash is going to be able to keep more than six Pokemon with him because although he hasn't discovered Aura, there's a catch to it. Agatha, Sabrina, Misty, and Brock will teach him to create PokeBalls out of Spectral, Psychic, Aquatic, and Living Energy. He will also master making PokeBalls out of Shocking and Torching energy, with the help of Rapidash and Pichu. 6. Ash will capture a lot of Pokemon, and at one point the PokeDex will be complete, but it probably won't be until one of the last chapters of the Pokemon Stars Arc. 7. Ash will be dubbed the Charizard Master, as well as Champion/Top Coordinator of several Leagues and Tournaments. 8. While he will age, Ash will accomplish this in a matter of 5 years.

This is just really interesting keep it up

For the record, until it becomes a Hydreigon, it will be virtually blind.
I recommend a leash.
I swear if Team Rocket is in this fic I am likely going to get so confused that I, honestly I don't know what I'll do.
Sableye, that dark hyena, what else is their?, oh yeah that see dot thing, absol, umm anything else?

Also Unova zoroark can get flamethrower which is a good bug and fairy counter, also aerial ace is learnable.

why are you treating this like its the game? Pokemon don't have life points in the anime.

like XD

denio Is so cool

great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

Interesting story.. But either that Charizard was pathetically weak or Riolu is at an extremely high level. Even as a Lucario, Charizard should have easily won that fight.

Yay finally a fc where Giovanni is Ash's father YAY although while I love Hoenn best I don't really think it is accurate to say they have the largest Dark types

I mean I only counted 11 and that is with evolutionary pokemon as separate

Sinnoh has twelve

Unova has 13 (including dieno and its evolutions)

kalos has 37 dark types

Granted many of these are mixed however (basically multiple games have them) and i was going from the wikia list but still Kalos appears to have the most Dark Types so yeah

Yeah fuck off, fucking lover of retard Ash. Weakling too.

riolu finally evolved, good fight.
but too much battles here.
maybe it would be better if you focused only on our main characters battles instead of each OC we probably never heard again