Very interesting, at first it was a little confusing, but that is starting to clear up. The end result should be even more interesting, and Fun. Poor Jake, put upon by a couple of cute girls, one of which he will get to know Much Better later. Thank You. TTFN

Greetings,

I'm curious as to where you were planning to take this, I see a lot of potential. However as it's been nearly five years since it was last updated, I won't hold my breath on you ever continuing it.

Later,

Krys Griffin

Just found your stories & began to read them , thus far I have to say a job well done. I started with ritually Yours before checking out Defiance, I can't wait to see updates to Defiance at some point in time