Reviews for Bloodstained Machinations [Mutatis Mutandis]
Gage39 chapter 4 . 12/28/2011
Hey this story was pretty good! But Kitty shouldn't have been so hard on Lance. He was just trying to make sure that nobody else came after them again. I hope they all get along and don't kill each other. Where's Wolverine? I hope he shows up soon. Keep up the good work!

Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
Freeverse too lazy to sign in chapter 2 . 8/20/2002
Honestly? This fan fiction is shit. Your portrayl of Mystique is utterly horrible. She's not a stupid ignorant bitch as you make it seem. And what Mystique is planning to do with the X-Men? Unoriginal. Your style is good, I'll give you that, and kudos for the language! lol, I'm 15 and I cuss every damn day. lmao. But... even if Mystique sucks ass in this story, Scott and Jean (for the two lines she was in it) were played well. Ummm... is that a good enough trying to be nice flame?
Geministarz chapter 4 . 8/11/2002
great story, lovin it...
kitana chapter 4 . 8/7/2002
Very good so far. Can't wait to see where this one's going. Would be even better if you'd tone the language down just a bit. I give you a smiling Cyclops ()-)!
Icy Flame chapter 4 . 7/24/2002
This is really great! I am so excited! hehe Jean is such a powder puff, dude it can't be THAT HARD to live in the brotherhood joint, I mean the BOM does it! Eh anyways this is getting serisouly interesting! I hope you make this Rietro and I can't wait for the next chapter! All of the characters are IN character, their behaviors are of themselves as represented on the television series! This is just like watching an episode! lol You have a TON of talent, I mean really you do! The plot kicks ass! Later yo
The Scribe3 chapter 4 . 7/24/2002
Great fic I love it. Write more ASAP. Please more Bobby, Amara and the rest. Hopefully Scott will do something about Mystique.
Tigsam chapter 3 . 6/24/2002
This is soooooooooo interesting and who cares about language? Thats how people talk in the real world _. Can't wait for the next chapter.
James K chapter 2 . 6/19/2002
good story... wonder what's wrong w/ rogue tho... poor brotherhood... u gonna add pietro?
KB chapter 2 . 6/16/2002
it's interesting. Been wondering what would happen after DoR. Keep writing
rambling procrastinator chapter 2 . 6/12/2002
This is really great so far! Very interesting, keep up the good work...the title is from mudvayne right? (unless someone else has something called mutatis mutandis somewhere) awesome (title and the story). Update soon! ~k
WritingMoose chapter 2 . 6/12/2002
Another great chapter. What's gonna happen to the New Recruits?
bradleigh chapter 2 . 6/12/2002
That was awesome. I'm hooked. Update soon.
Phoenvix chapter 2 . 6/12/2002
ooooooh Ah am jes' LOVIN' this! An absoloutly fantastic story with some fantastic lines in it too. I've even added two of them in my AIM profile :)Thats how much I like them and this story. Keep up the good work!
Lady Tokimi chapter 2 . 6/12/2002
Very well done! I love stories like this! _
idsunki chapter 2 . 6/11/2002
This is really well written, and I'm looking forward to more. I haven't read all of the post Day of Reckoning fics that have popped up yet, but so far this is one of my favorites.

Obligatory little constructive criticism - you do a great job of showing Scott and Jean's reactions to things, but we miss out on a lot of the other characters. You don't seem to completely ignore them, but not all of them get much screen time, especially Kitty and Wanda so far. Other than that, this is shaping up to be a great fic.

-idsunki, who should occasionally take his own advice
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