| Reviews for Escape |
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   wandamarie chapter 9 . 5/28 wow good ending thank you |
| wandamarie chapter 8 . 5/28 thank you |
| wandamarie chapter 7 . 5/28 thanks keep up the good work |
| wandamarie chapter 6 . 5/28 wow getting good maybe Remes or a death eater |
| wandamarie chapter 5 . 5/28 holly cow getting good |
| wandamarie chapter 4 . 5/28 poor harry |
| wandamarie chapter 3 . 5/27 wow getting great thanks |
| wandamarie chapter 2 . 5/27 wow getting good thank you |
| wandamarie chapter 1 . 5/27 thanks |
| Matt chapter 8 . 11/16/2019 Are you insane? Nothing bad happened in third year? So having dementors try to suck out his soul three times (on the train, quidditch game, and year end with Sirius) wasn't bad? It certainly wasn't good. |
| Matt chapter 8 . 11/16/2019 She didn't kill any hens, you fool. She killed the roosters. Because a rooster's crow could kill the basilisk. Hens don't crow, so there would be absolutely no point in killing any hens. Do you even bother to read what you write? |
| Matt chapter 5 . 11/16/2019 You have a serious issue with homonyms (words that sound the same but are spelled differently). Vane, for example, should be vain. You do it with other words as well. Maybe you should get a beta; one who's good with spelling. A word processor with grammar checking would help too. |
| Matt chapter 2 . 11/16/2019 It's a Miata, not a Miada. There's never been a Mazda Miada. You could look it up if you don't know how it's spelled. |
| Kushka chapter 9 . 7/30/2019 Ok story |
| Guest chapter 9 . 9/13/2018 great story thank you for a wonderful read. |
