Short and intense and damn beautiful.
Thank you for sharing.
Best, Lisa.

Fantastic! I'm so glad Loki didn't freeze when Tony told him that he loved him, but instead allowed him to explain why he was so afraid, and it was just such a nice and sweet scene! :D Great job, i loved it! :)

I really, really liked it, especially the last lines.

This is such a brilliantly written story, the emotions were conveyed very well! I don't suppose a sequel would be in order? *hopeful glance*

my heart feels so deliciously happy.

Amazing! I wish I could write like this, I fail horribly at FrostIron. DX But you caught them and made me believe it, and broke my heart, so this was amazing.

Beautiful. Well written and simple yet intriguing. Keep on writing, you have talent.

this is awesome! I absolutely love it, and i'm always looking for some frostiron (ironfrost?) love. keep writing!

"He'd enjoy it to the end, and then drink himself into a coma after."- i really think this is the perfect line for Tony. i really loved this fic ... so emotional and sweet at the same time.. just lovely!

Cause my mum wouldn't stop talking so I couldn't read in my head ... I read the last 3 paragraphs in a calming British accent ... AND IT WAS AWESOME!

You grasp such eloquence and passion with your writing, even though the tale you tell is brief with this piece, it is *utterly* gorgeous :)

Wow, that was great.

Lovely. Just lovely. :)

You should put a division bewteen the end of the story and the beginning of your notes, it's confusing.

I enjoyed your story, even thought I usually don't like angst. Yours isn't overhelming- it brings some emotions, some sadness but balances it well with happiness. Good job!