comne on. i can't wait for the next chapter.

every time i find a good fanfiction on here its always short/dead for years... whyyyyy *crys*

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Pleeeeaaaase make more! This is awesome!

This is actually really good!

like

A female uchia and hinata and Eno and cat.

This story is too good to leave alone! MORE UPDATES!

It has been two year more chapter pleass.

Sakura, Hana, Hinata, and maybe Tenten as well in my mind make an interesting harem for our shocking little blond ninja. I like where this is going thus far - and I have to say that I ALMOST feel bad for the Uchiha clan head and Danzo... and the snake summoning bastard Orichimaru-teme will be SO screwed when he attempts to take down Konoha

This may sound odd for the second person I'd like to request for the harem, So I'll just say, it's an rare pairing, and even rarer in crossovers.

I'd like to request that Ino or Amaru (from the movie "Bonds") join the harem. Amaru doesn't have to join right away, but I'd suggest not using the Movie's plot for her backstory, just something similar. Or have that movie happen earlier, with the exclusion of Sasuke in the movie.

Just to let you know, In case you didn't already, Sly's cane is one of the DLC for inFAMOUS 2. I think it's a re-skin/re-mesh. It's only 100 kb, so I'm not entirely sure, seeing as I've never had the chance to take a look at the file system of a PS3 game. Also, this sound suspiciously like one story that has 13 chapters with an average of 6.6 k words per chapter. I was just reading it earlier, the name has "red" and "lightning" in it. No point in trying to find out ATM.

I like the story, though it seems somewhat like you're rushing, which gives it a forced feel. I now that feeling from when I read over my chapters that I write. When a story gets to be over 1 k words when I write it, it feels forced.

I like it so far, and I'll keep reading it, I just thought I'd give you a heads up.

whoa yeaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh this is awesome. cant wait for the next chapter. and i have some suggestions for the harem list.
list:
hinata
ino
tenten
temari
yugito
haku
kin
tayuya.
there are more but idk if youd like that many girls in your harem. just holla at me when you are going to update please. and if you need more people in the harem ill tell you alot more girls that could be in the harem. :D. again this is an amazing work and you should continue this story. also if you need help ill be willing to sacrifice some of my freetime at home to help you :D.

add yugito and mei and fu and karui to the harem and make more this great