If you have to tell us in the summary that your OC is not a Mary Sue, then she's a Mary Sue. Occam's Razor.

This is one of the best I've ever read! Keep up the good work, update quickly for me!

Was that Boris the Spider? xD

Okay, wait. On the first chapter I saw Fleetwood Mac, and then this chapter's title. Please tell me you are a Pink Floyd fan (or David Gilmour) :3 If not, oh well...

i love this chapter
some dirty parts yet smexy:3
other than that i love it!

(TO CLAIRE) VAGINA POWER!

aww! :)

Dayum.
You should write more.

please update soon :)
great story so far!

I am very much enjoying what you have written so far. I look forward eagerly to more chapters.

Haha I love how jacks all like "mine" haha soo where is claire's crazy side coming out? Haha but keep writing haha halfway Theo I was lik damn where can I get me a guy like jack

Lovely dialogue and you've stayed true to character. I loooooveeee this, but i think you need to elaborate on your OC, don't really know what she's about yet.

Muhahahaha me likey:)