Absolutely Brilliant story! 10/10

Just letting you know that I really enjoyed this read. I think that you've created a good representation of Paolini's work and I look forwards to reading the sequel, whenever you get around to finishing it. At any rate thank you for the time and effort needed for this book.

Okay, I read the story this far. The idea of the plot and your overall writing was good enough to keep me going. But at this point it has just turned into "Eragon can't do anything and Yuna can do everything" story. Eragon's state is even worse than what it was in the original series. Whereas Yuna seems to have read the Inheritance Cycle, forgot it, but working on the subconscious knowledge.

It's good, My only issue is that you made Eragon seem incompetent. Other than that it's good.

eragon fanfiction... okay... :I

Well I'm glad it only took me 4 chapters to recognize the winding circle reference. I knew there was something familiar and it was driving me crazy

Thanks for writing! This has been a great read!

This is one of the better Eragon character insert fics i have seen, and with the number i have seen, that is impressive! Keep writing, you are a truly skilled author, also, please remove that complete tag,,since this is obviously not complete.

Great job on this chapter!

i spotted one minor mistake here.

you one moment you stated the stone is green color.

the next, is that the shade confirmed himself that it is blue stone.

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Good chapter

Good story

Your story has helped me out and lifted my spirits in a very hard time. I'd like to thank you and also offer to beta any works of yours. I'm not creative enough to write, but I can at least be a second spell check! My email is if you ever need decide to continue this. So far your writing has taken me on a wonderful adventure. Thank you so much.

excellent story beteer than most Eragon fanfic

Myah! Myah! I'm surprised at how good the writing is!