| Reviews for The Hero's Formula |
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Basket in a Nutcase chapter 1 . 9/17/2016 Alfred. Alfie. Alfreddy. Plz no |
The Magnetic Witch chapter 11 . 6/16/2013 D-dear gosh... America would be left with only two states..? ... ... *Faints from shock* |
PASTA300 chapter 11 . 3/23/2013 This is AWESOME! It's so interesting and funny! Plus the plot is wonderful. Everyone's character is perfect and the interaction between Germany and America, America and Italy, Sealand and Prussia, Prussia and Hungary, Italy and Germany, Germany and Prussia, France and England, and America and England is terrific! I'm totally favoriting this! |
Oetrapetra chapter 11 . 3/22/2013 Aaaannnddddd? What happens next? |
Friskbee chapter 10 . 1/25/2013 Haha, and this is the only time America realizes that he screwed up, big time. |
Fourth in Command Cixalea Jwan chapter 10 . 12/24/2012 This is a wonderfully well-written story! The plot is great, and I found myself laughing out loud several times! You just nailed the nations' personalities! It's also refreshing to find a story that doesn't have pairings. Keep writing! Looking forward to it! |
DeadNotSleeping chapter 9 . 11/9/2012 Wait, you think Dr. Horrible has suggestive content? Pfft, you want suggestive content, go look up a musical like Book of Mormon or Avenue Q. Now those are some really suggestive musicals! |
MoonPieDumpling chapter 9 . 11/6/2012 This is an awesome story, I can't wait to see how it ends! |
imagination junkie chapter 8 . 10/6/2012 SJADHFJKAHSDLJFHLKSJHFLJK This chapter was AMAZING. So, so funny. And you got Prussia perfect in my opinion. I can't wait to see what happens next! |
Cloudjumper-rider chapter 7 . 8/13/2012 Oh man poor Sealand :( XD Spain reaction |
MaskedMusician chapter 7 . 8/13/2012 WAHH! That was awesome! XD I think the fairys will get Ita with a spell next, possibly something to make him stand up for himself...X3 Or maybe even Germany XDD Anyways, I found Canada's part hilarious! Can't wait for the next update Ciao! |
Guest chapter 7 . 8/12/2012 Good job and keep up the work! If referencing the previous chapters, I don't think America spiked his own drink. Being that most of the other characters will fall under the potion's spell (I want to see Russia's!) I'm assuming it's going to drive America crazy by the end. It would be good to see more of how this all pans out! |
Aylin.Moon chapter 7 . 8/12/2012 Wow, it's getting even more interesting! And it's refreshing to see some -okay, from what you say very much- OOCness that's on purpose. Plus, I like how you involved the fairies, but I'm a little confused - does that mean the potion only works with fairies that help, or is it another side effect because it was made and drunk by humans, or is it something completely different? :) Oh, and I could imagine the last one is for America. Of course because of the colours(though it could be France or someone else who's flag colours I haven't got in mind), but also because of "declares" (y'know, declaring independence and stuff, though it's possible that that wasn't on purpose) and "even the strongest shan't escape"(America is physically definitely one of the strongest, if not -and that's very likely- the strongest). I'm looking forward on how this will be continued :) |
ILloveCANADA chapter 6 . 7/25/2012 This was awesom (almost) as prussia! Please keep with th good job...ho and I think that Japan or switzerland's sister (I don't know how you spell her name... ah please lower this gun switzerland, just lower it okey? Iwill cheak it on the Internet and memorize it right now; I promise so put that gun down, 'key) or maby someone unexpected like russia ( ho no I didn't mean it russia is very nice he absalutly don't the peace potion so you can put the knife in it place now belarus, no it's place is not through my heart! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh -screaming while running- screw what I said make it belarus make it NOW) love you o.. and sorry about the almost thing... it just that every time I tried to earse it a strange little yelow bird attacted me...mmm... I wonder who she belonged to poor poor poor canda... don't worry if someone will try to hurt you I will make sure to give them a long painfull death Did you hear it genious author? YOU SHOULD BE VERY VERY CAREFULL I HAVE MY EYES ON YOU.. |
Guest chapter 5 . 7/4/2012 This is awesome! Update soon! By the way, I'm What ThE Crapola Is This, but I'm just too lazy to log in XD |