This was wonderful, thank you!

Any story that starts with hot chocolate has to be good! I loved how quiet this story is, you can feel the cabin and the wilderness and how relaxed they both are being there in front of the fire. I loved the Ayn Rand poem about the spark and having the life you want and how it tied into your story with their sparks and how they finally have the life that they deserve. The last line, where Kate knows she will never let her love go for Rick, is a nice culmination. Finally she is where we have all wanted her to be for so long, in the emotional sense and the physical sense! Thank you as usual!

Hey! Absolutely loved this, so sweet and romantic. Amazing imagery too, loved this line:

"Her eyes stay locked with his, the forest within her depths begging for his oceans of blue to put her out" - just beautiful!

Great job! Ly x

Beautiful, amazing, exciting descriptive writing. A masterpiece.

This was so good. It's my first time reading a Castle story, and you didn't let me down. x

Very well written story.

Comparing the growth of their love to the actual fire in the fireplace was just beautiful. And Kate is not going to let her fire go out.

Thanks for sharing this. I enjoyed reading it.

Talk about hot! First a slow burn, and then... Wham! Wildfire! You kept it steadily burning the whole way through.

Yup, I just shamelessly used puns about fire to review your story. ;) In all honesty, though, I did enjoy it. Thanks for posting!

soft slow steady sensual tender truthful, lasting...perfect!

The whole thing is just so romantic and VERY well written! I especially love the last lines, and how she's not letting her own fire go out, therefore leading to her feeding the actual fire ad stuff like that... Not the best summarizer, am I?

By the way, this is Jennie. I didn't feel like loggin in to write a review, so right now I'm anon

"But one thing she knows for certain. She will not let her fire go out. And so she slips from his loving grasp, padding over to the hearth, she sets another log upon the lazy flames, sending their sparks anew."

I loved the use of the fire metaphor. So beautiful and sensual. The whole story just flowed so well. I loved it! And now I want a fireplace... lol

baby voodoo

Oh my! That was good!

"But one thing she knows for certain. She will not let her fire go out. And so she slips from his loving grasp, padding over to the hearth, she sets another log upon the lazy flames, sending their sparks anew."

That was incredible. Remarkably vivid, great metaphor, wonderful prose. You have found your words, and lucky for us, you shared them here.

I especially love the sentence above. It sums up this fic perfectly, the fire in her heart. Light a fire in me, let the sparks fly.

Great job.

Cheers

Jerry

That was really lovely...

I want a fireplace... (one that comes with Richard Castle naked on the carpet in front)

Beautiful. And so unbelievably hot. Whew! I love this.