I love it. I Love It. I LOVE IT! Update!

this chapter is awsome! I just read it now but please keep writing! The story is just tooooo frieking awsome to stop just then and there!

I want more ! Make Amu reveal herself ! Please I BEG you ! Hehehe :))

udpate soon

GAHHHH! THIS IS SOOO GOOD! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

Hehe, I love this plot you came up with. I'm always up for an action story/romance story, ANY DAY! :D Update soon..Don't be like me...(Me - Update once a week...lol)

X3

-Azuky, Your Regular Noob.

UPDATE! pleeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaass ssssssseee UPDATE! :)

update soon plz

update soon plz :DDDDDDDD

COME ON! Is that all?

please please get then next chapter in i was to read it:)

Nice story :3 *claps*

Amazing plot but be careful with the characters, you gotta remember about their personality...anyways, I was planning to do something similar to this one but I find this better than my original plan. I can't wait till the next chapter :)

...I wonder if Ikuto will visit her in the next chapter *goes away*

Wow. You did an exceptionally good job in this chapter. I can't wait for chapter 3! Keep up the good work. Oh, and if you need a beta reader, I am always avaliable.

:)

A word of advice: don't author note In the story. Author note at the beginning or end.

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