This didn’t make any sense...

Oh my god,this is amazing.
you had tears running down my face

Great chapter!

Great start.

I felt like my review didnt say everything I really wanted to say. I love how Bella is trying to live again and then she has to choose. I wonder if Jacob understands why the pack let her go so easy? It is because everyone else didnt want to lose the ones they love. It seems selfish but think about it. one person for hundards maybe.

I love hearing Jacobs profile so please more of them.

Great chapeter but I wish it could have been longer. I can see your writing getting better as the chapters go on.

Poor Jacob! What happened to Bella? Please post soon. Dont get discouraged that you dont have many reviews, they will come. Just keep up the work. I have to know what happens

This story has intrigued me, keep it up. I wonder what is going to happen to Bella? Is the Volturi going to keep their end of the deal. CAn't wait for an update.