Reviews for The Ultimate Defence
Whimsical Palette chapter 6 . 4/5/2015
thank you - this story was utterly cute !
MikkiePooh chapter 6 . 3/15/2015
I absolutely love this! It's so sweet (-/-)
SymmetricGirl chapter 6 . 10/6/2013
Omg! I love this! This ish so awesome! I'll be waiting for the sequel! :D
Shoko Fuuyumi chapter 6 . 9/9/2013
OMG OMG OMG OMG!

And you say you're not native speaker!

OMG I like your style of writing and describing so much!

There are some minor grammar mistakes like verb tense and things like that, which could make reading a bit confusing, but it's okay.

Thanks for writing this! I totally love Sayuri x Gaara
AkibaraLatina chapter 6 . 5/2/2013
you you you you you you teased my brain i was at the edge of my bed waiting and waiting, scene getting hotter and then BOOM no lemon (
you are a brain teaser... I LOVE IT
Kiteria Faye chapter 6 . 12/26/2012
aww. sweet.
Kiteria Faye chapter 5 . 12/26/2012
she probably thinks he didn't want her to kiss him or something. wonder how this will end.
Kiteria Faye chapter 4 . 12/26/2012
aww. he realized he liked her only to think he can't have her. sad, but someone will eventually snap him out of it...hopefully.
Kiteria Faye chapter 3 . 12/26/2012
aww, sharing background stories.
Kiteria Faye chapter 2 . 12/26/2012
haha. that would be an interesting way to wake up.
PinkMelon1981 chapter 6 . 12/15/2012
Way to go! Awesome fanfic! There would be a sequel, right? I will LOVE to read that as well. Good luck, Panda lover.
astralilly chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
Thank you for the amazing story,,
Cant wait for the sequel )
Hopefully you will write it soon.
AlwaysRunning9 chapter 6 . 7/30/2012
SO CUTE. There are no othe words for this but AWWWHHHH. Totally heart-warming! A true love story:) this was sooooooo good! I loved reading it. Can't wait for the sequel, good job!
From a Fan chapter 6 . 7/19/2012
That was an awesome story and written so well you could practically put yourself into the characters position. I don't normally review the stories but that was to great not to. Its definitely up there as one of my favorites. Cant wait till the sequel starts!
Shadow-Ninja-Captain69 chapter 6 . 7/14/2012
AWWWWESOME! :D
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