| Reviews for The Powers Yet Unknown |
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Guest chapter 7 . 6/8/2015 When is chapter 8 coming out?! This is amazing |
The Professor of time chapter 7 . 12/30/2013 yo, you should update again. yearlong hiatus's are bad for good stories. |
BENDROWNEDISOUTTHERE chapter 1 . 11/10/2013 i would love to join your community! Great start by the way! |
Shamangirl1 chapter 7 . 4/6/2013 Awesome chapter, keep them coming please! |
Shamangirl1 chapter 3 . 4/6/2013 Lol the pin is stalking him |
Lunix1412 chapter 7 . 1/14/2013 The only thing I'd really recommend is describing a few features. Like the fighting ground, the appearance of the corrupt Hanekoma and possibly even a sample of his power. Other than that, it's great to see the story progressing |
Crow's Gamble chapter 7 . 1/11/2013 You have some really interesting ideas. We have a pretty similar style, but you definitely have some ideas I haven't thought of. Keep this story going strong! A corrupt Mr. H has never crossed my mind. Keep up the good work! Crow |
TheEighthLight chapter 6 . 9/27/2012 so UPDATE THIS NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOW |
foggraven chapter 6 . 8/4/2012 neku and shiki were so cute got to say though shiki needle attacks sound pretty scary not to mention painful but it's totally awesome hmm wonder who the other person with the corrupt hanekoma is I'll be looking forward to finding out |
Lunix1412 chapter 5 . 7/11/2012 Can I just say that I love that title? 'Twister' is definitely one of the best in the soundtrack. Awesome mission, awesome concept, awesome bad guy, and awesome game. The only thing that would make it perfect would be Kingdom Hearts and Percy Jackson as parallel universes in the story, but that's just my current obsession. Keep up the brilliant story! I can't wait to see the rest, its inspiring for my story :) |
Shiro chapter 5 . 7/8/2012 I really like how this story connects to the actual game. I just finished it too!(yay me)didnt expect it to have something to do with alternate universes xDI really enjoy this story so keep up the good work. |
Shiro chapter 3 . 7/8/2012 Wow O.O man thatwaa great i love this story and im totally hooked! I wonder why the pin doesnt leave though I had a great imagining the part where neku breaks the pinXD |
foggraven chapter 5 . 7/6/2012 Is Neku an angel or is level just at that of an angel ? I wasn't to clear on that Shibuya itself choosing Neku is extremely cool and fits with this well i think In anycase another great chapter |
foggraven chapter 4 . 6/27/2012 Kariya as Conductor fits I think though he'll probably be the laziest Conductor in history |
foggraven chapter 3 . 6/27/2012 lol It looks like Joshua still likes messing with him |